Would I be shooting myself in the foot if I write about a snail for my creative? (1 Viewer)

[shinninggum]

You need something that is like ironic at the end, when the snail reaches there. Like something bad happens, something like that.

 

[bao28]

You need something that is like ironic at the end, when the snail reaches there. Like something bad happens, something like that.

yes cuz if a snail kept walking onto my front yard everyday id step on it

or first things first, if i saw one id step on it anyway

maybe you can talk about the crunch the snail made after the guy stepped on it coming back the day he built his lil house in his front yard LOL

edit: you know descriptive writing
"the crunch on the snail's shell imploded the poor thing" dont ask me how a snail implodes, lol