Yeah I didnt say it was a monologue but I said basically the same things - personal tone allows the reader to experience the journey with them etc.berra said:uhm... im getting confused....
for text 2, i sed it was a monologue and creates a personal voice n allows readers to fell as though they embark on the physical journey aswell.. etc etc...
n bout the landscape ( as far as i rememba it asked bout the significance of describing the landscape or sumthing) - i sed it enhances the thoughts of the writer, creates imagery, the tone whilst describing portrays her perceptions and ideas as she is 'shocked'...
wat do u guys think????
i'm starting 2 get worried now :'(
Bushrat said:I said it was significant because it reflected the character of that Sheridan guy....hmmn. Now I am worried....a friend of mine said she put that it was a metaphor for white settlement in Australia.
holy shite.. really? i thought i was the only weirdo who thought that was the significance of it... not that i'm saying you're a weirdo or anything... now it means i'm not a weirdo cos somebody else thought that too.. phew.Bushrat said:I said it was significant because it reflected the character of that Sheridan guy
dvsangel said:holy shite.. really? i thought i was the only weirdo who thought that was the significance of it... not that i'm saying you're a weirdo or anything... now it means i'm not a weirdo cos somebody else thought that too.. phew.
I thought it was a reflection on Sheridan too. The whole idea of the landscape being perfect for a hippie like Sheridan. It was a slightly unkept landscape with overgrazed paddocks, the rusted watertank, the flies etc but then he notices the hardwork sheridan had put in with all the new fenced plantings, and then through the idea of the cave, coming to realise that this was a home to Sheridan and it was cosy, warm, and homely place. I felt it was a description of the landscape that Sheridan called home, and how at first it was strange and slightly odd to the composer however he comes to learn that it is home to Sheridan by his interpretation of the landscape etc .... something along those lines.berra said:fear not my friend... lol, i wrote sumthing along those lines 2