Can't say I'm an expert on the subject, but here's my 2 cents.
I like to think Drama essays are just like English essays, but they require a bit more quoting, deep analysis of the text..etcetc.
As for formatting the actual essay...this is what I did.
Intro: include texts, authors, dates, what you're going to say (pretty much identical to an english essay).
Each text should have it's own body paragraph OR if it's a compare and contrast questions...then you might want to put each 'issue' or common facet in a body paragraph. I know ppl who do it the latter way and get away with it, I was advised against it so I didn't use it.
So when I say each text should have it's para...you've still got to organise your information. make your point, then move onto the next...unless you need to compare. Make the links strong, make your knowledge of the text strong. Refer to workshopping activities in class, make them up if you didn't do any. Refer to stage productions of the text you've seen. If you're teacher was slack and didn't take you to see any, refer to workshop activities in class...don't make up a production, you'll get caught out. Quote quote quote. But make sure you refer to the quotes and they're highly relevant. Don't put them in there for absolutely no reason.
I'm not really comfortable with sharing an entire essay...like I know we're honest yah da yah da yah...but there are ppl that plagerise...and I don't like it.
So I dug up this practice essay of mine...it was deemed a bit wishy washy by my teacher...I'm only sharing the intro for what it's worth.
Incl. is the question:
In your answer you will be assessed on how well you:
-Demonstrate knowledge and understanding of drama and theatre relevant to the question.
-Express your point of view and use appropriate supporting evidence.
-Present a sustained, logical and well-structured answer to the question.
Question 1 (2001 HSC) [20 Marks]
How does the Australian drama you have studied use particular forms and conventions to explore significant experiences of living in this country?
In your answer you should refer to AT LEAST TWO texts set for the topic you have studied.
Contemporary Australian Theatre (CAT) has consistently strived to develop new and diverse theatre forms, conventions and styles, ultimately to maintain a close relationship with the ever-changing nature of Australian society. CAT promotes a close relationship with cultural, political and social issues of Australia thus often representing the significant experiences of living in this vast land, such as unemployment, multiculturalism, homosexuality, drought, financial struggles and the notion of the ‘Aussie Battler’. Following the introduction of these new and differing issues to society, new forms and conventions were explored and experimented with as there was the sentiment that old forms and conventions were unable to ‘deal with the new realities’ (Professor John McCallum, UNSW). CAT explores these issues through transformational acting, epic theatre, realism, symbolism (primarily dealing with visual metaphors) and poor theatre. Australian theatre moved away from its English heritage (highly stylised, conservative theatre) and began to experiment with differing forms of expression such as street theatre. The two texts ‘Gary’s House’ (GH) written by Debra Oswald and Suzanne Spunner’s ‘Running up a Dress’ (RUAD) are no exceptions providing contemporary audiences with an array of issues all explored through a variety of conventions and forms.
You might of noticed that I integrated a quote there from prof. john mccallum...don't do it with text from a play, indent it like you would in english. the reason why i integrated it was because it would've looked shit and weird if it was indented.
Enjoy. Good luck guys. you'll be fine.