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[professorayton8]

Hi! I'm just wondering how you can use the quote from blade runner ' all these moments like tears in the rain'

Can I say- if we don't take into accounts the warnings by Scott and Shelley, all these moments may be lost like tears in the rain?


I know that sentence sounds really weird :/

Thanks

 

[Kiraken]

Hi! I'm just wondering how you can use the quote from blade runner ' all these moments like tears in the rain'

Can I say- if we don't take into accounts the warnings by Scott and Shelley, all these moments may be lost like tears in the rain?


I know that sentence sounds really weird :/

Thanks

sounds kinda lame and overdramatic tbh

 

[professorayton8]

Lol, so scrap it? What type of sentences aren't cheesy that I could use to conclude something?

 

[professorayton8]

It's urgent! :/

 

[Kiraken]

just reinforce the point of your essay i.e. what have you deduced via your textual comparison about the contexts of the two? Address and answer the question you are given

 

[cheepy5]

The poetic nature of the Roy contrasts to the prose of humans ..... reflect the human qualities of Roy and demonstrates some emotions from him, again greater than what the humans demonstrate - also creates some sympathy from the audience towards Roy.

Rain - links to the environment

Its a nice quote but you dont really need it

 

[p3rf3ction]

can you say it? what, is your teacher gonna suspend you for writing that? Just go for it ffs, it probably wont even change the mark you'll get

 

[Absolutezero]

Hi! I'm just wondering how you can use the quote from blade runner ' all these moments like tears in the rain'

Can I say- if we don't take into accounts the warnings by Scott and Shelley, all these moments may be lost like tears in the rain?


I know that sentence sounds really weird :/

Thanks

Yes, you can use it. Maybe change the wording of 'all these moments'. You should practice delivering it though, so it sounds right. A pause before 'lost' could help.