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Smelly Cat

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For belonging we have identity, relationships and world, and I focussed my creative on identity and world. The stimulus is asking for relationships and I need to e able to adapt this story. The story is about a girl living in a small country town, she finds a shell on the ground and gets inspired to go to the city. At the city she decides she misses her town and goes back because that is where she truly belongs. Note that currently there are no relationships - the girl is the ONLY character in the story at the moment and I don't know how to add another. Any help would be so so so much appreciated!!!
 

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You don't realise it but you have created a relationship in this story, as her relationship with her town. Relationships don't always mean two people, its English, which means it can be anything from her relationship with the world, her relationship with herself, her relationship of isolation etc.

But i'd say your story is fine in terms or relationships.

My story is about war and his only relationship was with war itself.

Hope this helps! PM if you need more help!
 

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