That's not exactly a question, it's more of statement, unless it tells you to discuss it. You probably should begin with a high modality response to the question and I think the inclusion of connections and stuff will fall in place naturally. However, I don't think the 'question' is very good to begin with.lets say the question is "identity is a key aspect to belong" and i want to incooperate the aspect of connection within it also, as through connection between people, community and the wider world, one's true identity is evident
A good and short thesis would be like:lets say the question is "identity is a key aspect to belong" and i want to incooperate the aspect of connection within it also, as through connection between people, community and the wider world, one's true identity is evident