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My groping fingers find the only thing that gives me solace, the whiskey bottle...

(Alright, I'm turning the character into an alchoholic on my first post. Go me.)
 

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... and started to take a sip. A few moments later a man walks up to me and says ...
 

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... but don't you drink it!". Surprised I was, and burst out laughing. The man...
 

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...takes the bottle from me, and it crashes to the ground.
 

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The bottle smashed into several pieces and a piece of glass richoched of the ground and scratched my left leg.
 

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Then I realized the man was tazing me, "BACK OFF!" I said. He continued, and then suddenly...
 

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[FONT=&quot]A horrible metallic taste – so much like blood – filled my mouth as I fought to ignore the words of the Voice. [/FONT]
 

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I slowly lifted my eyelids, there was a bright faze.
 

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