Ted Hughes essay - something's wrong with it? (1 Viewer)

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Could somebody please take a look at my essay?

My teacher said there needs to be a more "dense discussion" of Hughes' poems, but I'm not quite sure what she means by that..
I asked if she meant I needed to synthesise it more but she said no..

Can somebody take a quick look and tell me what she means / what I can fix up on my essay? Just leave a message and I will post it to you.

Many thanks!

 

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[Jamie74]

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