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Magaret Atwood - Journey To The Interior - Help!! (1 Viewer)

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i need serious serious serious help wif this stimulus text...

my mind's gone blank n its due for an essay real soon...

neone haf ne thoughts or notes?

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You're lucky indeed ;) i did this today in class :)

+written in the first person/monologue - allows the responder to gain deper insight and a more personal perspective of the persona's thoughts and feelings
+there is an extended metaphor (the persona's inner thoughts feelings and their actualy physical treck through mountains/hills)
+the use of the rhetorical question shows the poet's sense of confusion and questions theselves
+free verse shows a multi-dimensionalexploration of journey and also adds to the composer's pondering and questioning
+the use of the words "similarities" (line 1) and "differences" (line 20) shows contrast and allows the reader to make connections between the the physical journey denotated, with the inner journey connotated.
+Punctuation of colons, pauses give the impression of natural spoken language (kind of colloquial)
+Asonance - shoe, lucent, mushroom
+Descriptive langauage and strong visual imagery
 

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ideas on journeys:

- mapping metaphor - physical terrain of Canadian landscape as a metaphor for psychological exploration of self.

- distance between places is not like a flat map (not glossy, but sometimes ugly) 'swamps' & 'spindly trees' - realistic

- 'there are no destinations apart from this' - interior journeys are fundamental to all other aspects of our life journey.

- distractions along the way - domestic scenes etc - can get bogged down.

- can't rely on traditional methods - compass, sun

- 'calling on a vacant wilderness' - echoes a sense of futility (long vowels)

- end of poem - empahises importance of staying focused.

i have more info on the individual stanzas, techniques etc....
 

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Hello? Awww it's lonely.

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Is there anybody left here or is everybody at the beach? HELLO if there is! I'm virtually waving :). Does anyone have anything on Atwood (Stimmy Booklet Text 4) which is specifically related 2 the imaginative journey?
If you do, I'd love it if you could help.

Ciao!

Oh! Also! That stuff from purple and kimmeh thanks so much it really has helped.
 

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just quick things that haven't been said yet and popped randomly into my head...
*The most important thing about the description of the wilderness is the anomalies described and what they reveal in term of Atwood's mental state
*"A sodden log I'm sure I passed yesterday" - the need to confront deep-rooted fears and issues of the psyche
*Map and compass are useless because of the individuality of each person's journey into the mind: emphasised by the statement that none return unchanged
*lack of full-stop at the end of the poem indicates the limitless possibilites of journeys
*you can also talk about the visual in the stimulus booklet that the poem is superimposed over.

anyway, i've attempted to wipe journey's form my mind so that's all i really want to remember.
cheers all.
 

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Here's just a short summary describing what the poem is about:

Journey to the Interior by Margaret Atwood
Selected Poetry 1965-1995, Virago Press, London, 2000

Journey to the Interior by Margaret Atwood is a journey to the unknown, a journey within. This poem describes the human psyche by comparing it to the Canadian environment and natural landscape. Journey to the Interior is an inner journey of self discovery.

The first stanza talks of the similarities between the human psyche and the environment. The images conveyed here are dark, this is no romantic bucolic picture of nature: here the “trees grow spindly; with their roots often in swamps”. It is a “poor country”. If this is a metaphor for her interior self, it is a cutting rejoinder to the glossy, self-help pop psychology that abounds today. Rather the interior self is vast, perhaps murky and sometimes deficient. The scene developed here is harsh and real, this place is not fertile, it is false and misleading, a place where you cannot rely on conventional things “the travel is not easy going from point to point”. This is a decaying world.

The second stanza shows the differences between the interior journey and all others. This journey is not defined with “the lack of reliable charts;” this is unknown territory. This stanza introduces some strange images to the responder; “your shoe among the brambles under the chair where it shouldn’t be” this appears to be a domestic image, but when examining the definition of brambles we discover that this image is not normal. Here she is saying how others have tried to explore their psyche and as a consequence have become lost in themselves. As sort of an escape she lightens the mood “have I been walking in circles again?” this aside is an attempt to exit the dark and depressive world that is surrounding the subject, the world of herself.

The final paragraph shows another example at the author’s desperation to escape the seriousness of her inner world; “whatever I do I must keep my head.” This is a dangerous journey. “I know it is easier for me to lose my way forever here, than in other landscapes”.

This poem is full of visual imagery, referring to the landscape and environment. These images are dark and unusual which adds to the eerie feel of the poem “I move surrounded by a tangle of branches, a net of air”. The use of the first person pronoun “I” makes the poem personal and individual. The use of this pronoun is not intrusive though; it could be anybody – the universal “I”. The intended audience would be educated and fluent in English.

Margaret Atwood attempts to chart the dark mystery that is ourselves in this poem, The Journey to the interior. She uses irregularity in rhythm, visual and sound imagery to create an atmosphere of uncertainty and danger. Atwood effectively examines the journey of the human psyche by comparing it to familiar physical landscapes.
 

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Thankyou's to all

yeh thanks heaps to everyone who wrote in this thread. u all have been such great help. I finally feel a lil less stressed about my essay due when i go bak to school.
One last thing...
is journey to the interior an imaginative journey?
coz theres been such a mix of responses i am not sure. i guess its just what u make of it.
 

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frankie_furt, it can be any journey, really. It can be Physical, because Atwood alludes to the terrain of the mountains. It can be Inner because it is written in the first person, illustrating the composers reflection of "self" and it can be imaginative, because the persona is inspired and philosophical about the way life is, and uses her imagination to compare this to nature.
 

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