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[kami]

Evan is safe then despite his naughtiness, for little he most certainly is not! Evan says though that despite your criteria you really shouldn't turn Alan into a frog...it would upset Lynn mightily, Evan suggests that instead you might try your hand at turning John Howard into a frog, as absolutely no one would be disgruntled with that.

 

[illodous]

Evan is safe then despite his naughtiness, for little he most certainly is not! Evan says though that despite your criteria you really shouldn't turn Alan into a frog...it would upset Lynn mightily, Evan suggests that instead you might try your hand at turning John Howard into a frog, as absolutely no one would be disgruntled with that.

Matt argues with Evan's choice..
You've forgotten the matter of the ugliness and the eyebrows.. we'd have a toad with bushy eyebrows!

 

[kami]

Matt argues with Evan's choice..
You've forgotten the matter of the ugliness and the eyebrows.. we'd have a toad with bushy eyebrows!

He'd fit right in with the cane toads we are trying to exterminate then.

 

[super katie]

Evan suggests that instead you might try your hand at turning John Howard into a frog, as absolutely no one would be disgruntled with that.

Someone already beat Katie to it

 

[tez0r]

tez says hi to IPR for today!

 

[monique66]

Monique waves to Tez

 

[tez0r]

tez needs a shoulder to cry on after his EE2 teacher ripped up his MW over email, and then the phone, telling tez to change half of it

 

[monique66]

Don't fret TEZ! Everything will be fine, Monique is sure of it...
*she leans in and gives Tez her shoulder and pats his head* There, there

 

[kami]

tez needs a shoulder to cry on after his EE2 teacher ripped up his MW over email, and then the phone, telling tez to change half of it

Your teacher may be experienced, but she is not the end all of opinions, you can look at what she said and *why* she said it, but not all of it might gell with what you want to write and what you have set out to do. So don't despair! You can turn this around!

 

[monique66]

Evan, what's with you giving so much helpful advice?
*considers a brain transplant*

 

[kami]

It's because Evan is really a 60's housewife with a bent for homework

 

[monique66]

It's because Evan is really a 60's housewife with a bent for homework

Monique knew it!

 

[glitterfairy]

Lynn pats Tez on the head She then tells him that reworking is nothing to be afraid of - whilst it can be time-consuming (Lynn had to rework her *entire* major work, although she knew it was necessary so the "Now, you know you have a lot of work to do, don't you?" that came from her teacher wasn't really a big suprise) the results will be more than worthwhile.

She knows from personal experience how depressing having your major work ripped apart can be, however the satisfaction she felt when she *did* make mountainloads of changes and got the "This is SO much better! I'm very impressed!" from the critics was an absolutely gold moment.

Aside from that, she advises Tez to look very carefully at his major work. In all honesty, is it just not very spectacular, or does Tez need to rework it so his concept/intention is more clear? In Lynn's case, it was the latter.

 

[illodous]

Monique knew it!

Matt pats little duckiewitharaincoat nerd girl

 

[tez0r]

Tez's EE2 teacher said his writing is very clever and research is evident, but his intent needs to be clearer and tez sometimes tends to be too subtle for his own good =/

 

[illodous]

Tez's EE2 teacher said his writing is very clever and research is evident, but his intent needs to be clearer and tez sometimes tends to be too subtle for his own good =/

Matt wonders if Tez has written his Major with subliminal messenging:

The night was cold, colder than a frosty beer (damn I hate the Board...) with antelopes who danced the tango. Mrs Cambridge watched us like the witch she was (school smells funny) and gave us all special candy that made us feel like... (My EE2 teacher looks like a chimney heeheehoohoohaahaa!)

...

After reviewing his last statement, Matt has decided to drive himself to a correctional facility.

 

[monique66]

After reviewing his last statement, Matt has decided to drive himself to a correctional facility.

Thank you. Monique was thinking about forceably admitting him into phyciatric care but no longer needs to worry about that.

 

[tez0r]

Tez thanks IPR for their support and believes he shall rise like a harry potter phoenix from the ashes...mm...harry potter tomorrow.

 

[_Bushra_]

On another note, Monique says that she has never tries illegal drugs...especially not sniffing glue

What!? Why?!

 

[monique66]

What!? Why?!

lol, how much of this thread did u read? :S