I just received my prelim essay assessment back and got a measly 17/20 for quite a long essay. I still didn't finish however and had approx 7.5 pages of an exam booklet (approx 1000 words). How can I write less but still achieve band 6?
How do I make my essays more concise? (1 Viewer)
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Queenroot
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Don't Nominalise your sentences
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In what sense?
Queenroot
I complete the Squar3
There are two ways of nominalising.
Nominalise to make your sentences compact.
Don't nominalise to make them longer. This is something people tend to do more.
http://www.uefap.com/writing/feature/complex_nom.htm
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