Yes, we are all incredibly talented here in Tamworth, if that's what you mean.... Thanks for the analysis of my answer: I wasn't looking for one. Maybe you were just wrong? And even if you weren't, try not to be so rude about it, ok?
In regards to critical short-comings, I think you may have made one of your own. I did mention increases in net foreign equity levels, which is foreign ownership of assets - and I mentioned its effects (eg. int. bus. cycle etc). Granted, I didn't go into detail about how people get worried about foreign ownership, but I didn't think that was counted as an economic impact - more of a social one. If you want to criticise my response, sure, fine whatever. Like I said, it wasn't asked for.
Back to the topic - I did the same essay questions - so if you want to go over any particular areas, I'd be happy to help. When talking about globalisation, it depends on the type of question - usually its impact of globalisation on an economy, or differences in levels of development. For the first section you need to focus on the effects of changes in Labour markets/flows, Technology, Investment flows, Financial flows (eg. Exchange rates), Trade patterns and the impact of the International business cycle. For the second bit, you usually need to look at reasons for variations in development standards, in which case you'd go back to the first section, and then talk about why the changes in flows had the effects they did. eg. why did the sudden outflow of funds during the Asian Financial Crisis have the impact it did on Indonesia's economy. That might be wrong, because I don't have the syllabus in front of me - so I'm willing to take criticism. Plus, my hardest topic is globalisation - its so broad!