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ilikebeeef

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I get that most of it is because you're talking on the internet, but before you move up I suggest you revise the use of plurals, words like "who" and "which", the placement of adjectives and nouns in a sentence, the use (more specifically overuse) of conjunctions and tautology.

I assumed that your use of capitolisation, punctuation and spelling (slang/typos) are affected by publishing this informally on the internet.

Oh and I almost forgot to congratulate you :). Reading it over i realise it sounds kind of bitchy, and believe me I'm not perfect. I just thought it might be able to help you improve. Sorry in advance if I corrected you wrongly in any way.
Don't worry, I couldn't resist either. :D
 
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at above posts.

its a forum lol, relax.

Not like its the hsc.
 

thongetsu

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But it's good practice to get into good habits for the HSC.
 

thongetsu

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I just need to emphasise the fact that they mispelt 'changed'.
 

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haha maybe you should 'cange' back or learn to spell >.<
 

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Can any of you rats suggest any good movies which i could use as a related text for the topic journey?
 

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