Hi again. I found out that I got 50/50 for Music Ext, so I reckon I can help with ur essay. The jazz thing sounds good, but yeah, it's too broad. The fact that you're doing Australian jazz is really important, because, realistically, the only essays that do well are about Australian music, which is why I did contemporary Australian opera instead of European. There are a few REALLY important things - your Portfolio is SO important and you should try and get 50 for your internal assessment. It's so easy - just get the criteria and make it really obvious that a section of your folder (or I had 3 folders - research, analysis/correspondance and drafts) links to a dot point. The same with the actual essay - the most important thing is to have a hypothesis that's simplse, interesting and east to keep refering to ALL the time. You have to be good enough to say what your cnoclusions are going to be right at the beginning, without making it obvious to the marky markers. Also, score extracts are MOST IMPORTANT. The reason my essay was 35 pages was because I had a million musical quotations - I still made the word limit, 3400 I think, but I can't remember. Write all over the quotations by hand (it's not included in the wordcount). Highlight phrases and things that you refer to in various colours. Draw lines and whatever you need to get the point across. Finally, get as many people to check it as you can. Get every teacher in the world! English, History, and Music teachers. You'll find they have heaps of things to change, and once you stop being protective and just trust that they know how to rework it to play the game, you start realising how to do it as well. Just remember - it's not for you, it's for the Board. Play their game to win. If you wanna research and write a unique essay that doesn't meet the criteria, do it in your own time, just don't submit it. Hope this helps. P.s. If you get it out of the way really early, it's a whole unit done, so you can spend your time studying for subjects that actually have exams. I was so worried about how much time went into Musicology, but it was all worth it. Good luck.