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Harvard referencing style. i tried to cram it a bit, as it was 450 words over, so I wanted to make it look like there's less.
 
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but still, although the layout detracts from the overall impression, it was still nicely bound etc
 
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Oh and also looking over my 62% first assignment, the marker comments are:
'What, however is missing is any real attempt to independently examine and describe the result of economic policies of 200. Did GDP go up? Has national debt declined? IS employment up?.."
this was done by me on page 5. it wasn't deep but many of those above were actually commented on and even critiqued. furthermore, the core policies were also discussed on pages 3 and 4 of this particular essay.

"Reynolds and Stiglitz are both critics of IMF approaches...both can't be right except occasionally."
Well, I used them for a part in which they did in fact agree on.

"You needed to look at the issue of speculation against the real"
Actually, this was done well in page 3, even if I didn't directly talk about whether or not the IMF managed speculation.

Then there was stuff like "excellent citations, bibliography"
and on the marking sheet thing, citations are ticked as a good. So is my spelling, even though there's no errors.
 
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You used first person language in some parts. Isn't a policy briefing paper meant to be in 3rd person?

But i liked how you changed the brand logo :)
 
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I'm aware of the formatting, whilst it can detract from the way it looks and leads to a less positive impression, it shouldn't impact on the quality.
Also, I asked the tutor and first person is OK for this type of briefing paper, as I'm acting as a consultant for a business strategy division, who has performed his own research as well as designed his own logos etc.
 
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Also, I asked the tutor and first person is OK for this type of briefing paper, as I'm acting as a consultant for a business strategy division, who has performed his own research as well as designed his own logos etc.
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Yea, as long as you take on a 'role' it should be ok.
 
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stazi said:
I'm aware of the formatting, whilst it can detract from the way it looks and leads to a less positive impression, it shouldn't impact on the quality.
Also, I asked the tutor and first person is OK for this type of briefing paper, as I'm acting as a consultant for a business strategy division, who has performed his own research as well as designed his own logos etc.
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You also forgot the fag porn. Darryl'd like that.
 
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