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nicole_i

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hi guys so i am doing Shoehorn Sonata by john Misto for DV and my related text is weapons training by Bruce Dawe

ok im currently trying to relate both text and have 2 points
- how there is camaraderie in one and the other doesn't (it is more like a dictatorship)
- cruelty and abuse of power shown in both texts

and i am stuck on the last one

one point i was thinking of discussing was how there is endurance strength and resilience in the shoehorn but there isnt in weapons training but im not sure what techniques i would use to show that.... well ones i havent used..

pleassssee help i would love you forever <3
 

will1997

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Well, my prescribed text for study is not shoehorn sonata. But my only advice would be either you need to find a new related text or analyse your texts in a much deeper manner in order to find aspects that comparable.
 

Meekyo12

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I dont know anything about youur related text but a major idea in the Shoehorn Sonata would be the resilience of the women and how they where able through (shoehorn, carmel, chopbone ) to survive
and also the friendship and sacrifice that Shelia made for Bridie
 

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