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Belonging Essay - PLEASE HELP (1 Viewer)

alphophil

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Just a quick question...

If the question specifies an aspect of belonging (such as community), could you list out a few points on community and then say "however, there are a number of other aspects that create a sense of belonging as well..." and continue writing out some of your other points?

Or should you solely stick to the aspect specified in the question?

Thanks for your help
 

wierdowackjob

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I'm not sure if you would get marks though for straying from the point of the question. Sure you could include other notions of belonging and you wouldnt get marked down for it but i dont see why you would get marks for including information that isnt related to the specific notion of the question.
 

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Answer the question, simple. For example, I was doing the 2011 question, and it was about place. In my related I used to not belonging to people quotes to explain why my character belonged in isolation. So effectively once I explained that, I hit them with a quote on place and it was already explained and I just ripped more techniques and backed up my argument and concluded. :wink:
 

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