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n2s

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hi,

half yearly is coming up and struggling with english..i need some help on how to start it.

Can i start it like this?

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There's a time when you have no choice but to let go of your beliefs.
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it's like an intro to a movie how the narrator talks then the story begins..something like that.
 

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Yes you can.

Just have good concept, and develop your language throughout your story
 

n2s

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concepts..concepts..i had one in my mind for some time , it goes like:

- (character) is a 27 year old, lives a moderate life, dislikes any bad doings(killing, robbing, etc).
- One night (character) is robbed, where his brother, dad gets killed, his mum gets taken hostage, (character) notices a note on the kitchen table, asking for a ransom of XX amount, and to drop it at xx.

etc etc.. lol

original? or overused? i'm not good at these things lol :\..
 

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