2023 HSC chat (1 Viewer)

[carrotsss]

Thoughts on this thesis:

Texts rely on the portrayal of relatable ideas pertaining to collective human experiences to enrich and expand the reader's perception of the world through this portrayal enabling the construction of ideas that explores paradoxes, anomalies and inconsistencies thus providing an understandable base to challenge assumptions and prompt reconsideration.

Then the text related one:
To a great extent, Orwell in his dystopian novel... is able to ignite ideas relating to collective human experiences regarding the fulfilment of needs in his display of how oppressive systems that curtail the fulfilment natural and basic human needs create a brutal and unliveable society. He enriches the audience's knowledge of the world thereafter in establishing a meta-fictive address of his context that creates an imperative upon the audience to protect the inherent human needs of any individual in embracing the desire to connect as an agent that enables this fulfilment of all of Abraham Maslow's hierarchy of needs (i explain these in the paragraph that follows the intro). The character of Winston, although relatable to the audience as being the most distinctly human character, is presented as a persecuted anomaly within the oppressive Oceania that therefore addresses Orwell's context meta-fictively to establish this aforementioned imperative that prompts the expansion of the audience's knowledge of the world to protect the inherent human needs of any individual as they live in "a time when thought is free…when truth exists.”

I ended up getting down 11 quotes in 5.75 pages and was able to make good links to my thesis and the question constantly, maybe forgot a couple times. Only issue is my 2nd para was half a page long but had a good link and 3 quotes. Thoughts everyone?

why are you talking about Orwell we are done with him forever now

 

[aulinia]

why are you talking about Orwell we are done with him forever now

No seriously, when an exam is done it’s out of my mind forever and I move onto the next

 

[carrotsss]

is anyone else like extremely exhausted rn?

like I’m still getting work done and being decently productive because it’s the last stretch but I feel like I could collapse at any moment I’m so tired

 

[breadcrumbs]

is anyone else like extremely exhausted rn?

like I’m still getting work done and being decently productive because it’s the last stretch but I feel like I could collapse at any moment I’m so tired

i took a nap after paper 1 until 5pm i was genuinely so tired after and now we gotta study for paper 2

 

[qldbulls]

Thoughts on this thesis:

Texts rely on the portrayal of relatable ideas pertaining to collective human experiences to enrich and expand the reader's perception of the world through this portrayal enabling the construction of ideas that explores paradoxes, anomalies and inconsistencies thus providing an understandable base to challenge assumptions and prompt reconsideration.

Then the text related one:
To a great extent, Orwell in his dystopian novel... is able to ignite ideas relating to collective human experiences regarding the fulfilment of needs in his display of how oppressive systems that curtail the fulfilment natural and basic human needs create a brutal and unliveable society. He enriches the audience's knowledge of the world thereafter in establishing a meta-fictive address of his context that creates an imperative upon the audience to protect the inherent human needs of any individual in embracing the desire to connect as an agent that enables this fulfilment of all of Abraham Maslow's hierarchy of needs (i explain these in the paragraph that follows the intro). The character of Winston, although relatable to the audience as being the most distinctly human character, is presented as a persecuted anomaly within the oppressive Oceania that therefore addresses Orwell's context meta-fictively to establish this aforementioned imperative that prompts the expansion of the audience's knowledge of the world to protect the inherent human needs of any individual as they live in "a time when thought is free…when truth exists.”

I ended up getting down 11 quotes in 5.75 pages and was able to make good links to my thesis and the question constantly, maybe forgot a couple times. Only issue is my 2nd para was half a page long but had a good link and 3 quotes. Thoughts everyone?

Brother you are fine unless you need 20/20 I can't see almost 6 pages with quotes, decent language and analysis getting anything less than 17.

 

[No surprises]

For the people who's doing English tmrw(standard and advanced), don't be too panic about the mod c bc I do EAL/D and we did that part today. It is possible they will give you a choice(choose 1 yourself from imaginative/dis/pers)
I thought that's impossible cuz 2022 had this type of writing, but yeah we got the choice this year as well so don't be too panic.

 

[dequavioncousinsthe3rd]

For the people who's doing English tmrw(standard and advanced), don't be too panic about the mod c bc I do EAL/D and we did that part today. It is possible they will give you a choice(choose 1 yourself from imaginative/dis/pers)
I thought that's impossible cuz 2022 had this type of writing, but yeah we got the choice this year as well so don't be too panic.

is there actually a link between the questions of each of the papers?

 

[vvert2023]

is anyone else like extremely exhausted rn?

like I’m still getting work done and being decently productive because it’s the last stretch but I feel like I could collapse at any moment I’m so tired

YES bro i sat on my bed for a sec and it went from 130 to 430 in an instant bc i fell asleep.

 

[vvert2023]

why are you talking about Orwell we are done with him forever now

Georgey's a cutie ok.

No seriously, when an exam is done it’s out of my mind forever and I move onto the next

Yeah fair enough, I just like to make sense of it so I can feel ok in what I wrote.

 

[efrgwjkn4g]

does anyone have any quotes from pacinos 'looking for richard' about the pursuit of power

 

[SASH_06_X]

is anyone else like extremely exhausted rn?

like I’m still getting work done and being decently productive because it’s the last stretch but I feel like I could collapse at any moment I’m so tired

yh i just wanna sleep and never wake up again im exhausted with a capital E

 

[carrotsss]

does anyone have any quotes from pacinos 'looking for richard' about the pursuit of power

The oversimplification of his motives “I’m not the king and I want to be the king and I want to be the king. It’s that simple” validates his ambition to an audience who value egalitarianism and praise the Great American Dream.

Kimball’s empathetic declaration “he’s let the pursuit of power totally corrupt him” frames Richard as a victim of his own ambition, reflecting a greater psychoanalytic understanding of man’s innate lust for power, labelling it unavoidable.

 

[Unovan]

The oversimplification of his motives “I’m not the king and I want to be the king and I want to be the king. It’s that simple” validates his ambition to an audience who value egalitarianism and praise the Great American Dream.

Kimball’s empathetic declaration “he’s let the pursuit of power totally corrupt him” frames Richard as a victim of his own ambition, reflecting a greater psychoanalytic understanding of man’s innate lust for power, labelling it unavoidable.

fr the best quotes

also do you think not making power its own paragraph but instead intertwining it into Providence/religion (para 1) and gender dyanmics (para 2) is a decent idea? it's not too late to change because I have power, religion and gender paragraphs all memorised but idk I just feel like mixing power into those two works best.

 

[nsw..wollongong]

oh my god my themes are so different to urs am i doing something wrong

 

[breadcrumbs]

oh my god my themes are so different to urs am i doing something wrong

nah i have like nothing abt religion in my richard essay too

 

[amy.q18]

tomorrow is gonna be hell, gonna look and feel sleep-deprived
love how nesa is like mental health this and wellbeing that and then proceeds to hand out paper 2 with 3 writing tasks to be completed within 2 hours.

 

[carrotsss]

fr the best quotes

also do you think not making power its own paragraph but instead intertwining it into Providence/religion (para 1) and gender dyanmics (para 2) is a decent idea? it's not too late to change because I have power, religion and gender paragraphs all memorised but idk I just feel like mixing power into those two works best.

I’m sorry I’m not reading that I don’t need to mess with my memory of my own essay

 

[graceluvsA's]

Is anyone doing 'Mrs Dalloway' and 'The Hours' ?

 

[SadCeliac]

yh i just wanna sleep and never wake up again im exhausted with a capital E

SASH YOU MADE YOUR PFP A HUNDRED VIDIONS AND REVISIONS OMG PRUFROOOOOCK

 

[graceluvsA's]

SASH YOU MADE YOUR PFP A HUNDRED VIDIONS AND REVISIONS OMG PRUFROOOOOCK

I do T.S. Eliot and I still do not know what the quote means. Is it him saying theres time to think about stuff but then its like ironic because he wont take action??