Can someone give me feedback on my Mod A and B essays for English Standard?
mod a - One night the moon (film)
mod b - Feed by M.T Anderson.
Even if anyone can just check one of them i'd appreciate it cus im cooked for trials 💀
Question for mod a.
For my last assessment I did 3 paragraphs (however it was a 50 minute exam, which is 25% more time than you get in the hsc). I feel like as I cut the three paragraphs down to fit into a size I can write in 40 minutes, my argument is weakening because I can't expand on my...
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