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  1. violetcombe

    Arms race essay

    Any thoughts on how to split up an essay on the arms race? Idk like assess the significance of the arms race to the development of the Cold War to 1968? (if that's possible as a question) If anyone's done one or anything, help!
  2. violetcombe

    Mod B...informed personal perspective?

    my understanding is that 'I' is fine, and you will read plenty of academic writing that does use I. Just don't follow it with an anecdote about a conversation you had last week with a cashier at Woolworths, you know? Using I doesn't make your writing informal, writing informally makes your...
  3. violetcombe

    Can I Please Get Feedback On My Creative Story

    I really like it, and I think you have some real skill as a writer, it's hard to craft a world like this (!) ...a few people have mentioned that the plot is cliche but I think the bigger problem is cliche language. I'm talking about description like "the sunlight glistened on the morning dew"...
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