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Yes I thought it was very unnatural for Lady to be having a conversation with Allan at all, seeing as she's so reticent and jaded/bitter in the story. It isn't in her character to waltz up to a patronising man and tell him all her thoughts, seeing as she seems to curse everyone she meets under...

what is a camp????

so many early people.. I go at 12 or a bit later

That's such a shame! Do one at uni! It is true that not many people do them anymore, that's just how it is. I could understand 100% in the exams but you know, it's hard to really know what it's like overseas if you've never been! How's exams?

hahaha I wrote about the 'use of the comma'... we'll see how that plays out... I wrote enough so I guess that's good. In the conversation with Allan I didn't know whether or not to tell him that my job was to be a security-prüfer because it's supposed to be secret (if everyone knew then the...

that sounds right.. there was one more question??? i cant remember what was it (it was a 3 mark i remember)

what about the first question "Why does hermann hermann make this comment" when he says "you sang just like Marlene". I said H,H was both a victim and a villain and Hedwig would understand Rose is trying to help her change her ways

Hi! What did you think of the exam? Is Hermann Hermann a victim or a villain? How would Hedwig react to the TV-throwing-wig-debacle thing? What about the conversation script with Allan? And which essay question?

thanks for your insight!

I know that. What about the witch paradox?

it's all practice for the hsc. If you choose to 'bludge' or not care, then it just means you're going to have to make up for it at some point later. Keep going.

for extension in the böse Hänsel and gretel story, is the witch who "musste elendiglich verbrennen" the SAME witch who told the lion the story? : "das weiß ich von jener Hexe, die sie (die Geschichte) mir anvertraut hat" It's logically impossible. what do you think ngoetz

it seems obvious now that you say it but I had no clue what you were talking about with non-school (i thought it was the name of your school???) lol i am doing after the bomb and my story is about the world blowing up and then there being some people left over haha X_X

you've come this far you may as well seal the deal

for extension?

it's a transition illustrated through memory. the bomb creative is the after the bomb creative writing task, can you also translate what you said before about the msg to 'non-school'(?????)

i don't understand what you're saying in this^^^, but I think your story has a good original idea! Are you using something similar for bomb creative? It's hard to say without the actual story but it uses a remembered place AND a transition which is +++ so 13+

what did you get banned for?

I'm sure there are other ways to become filthy rich other than becoming a doctor

I liked it overall. At times the nature imagery got a bit too flowery (no pun intended) for me and seemed a little forced, but it had a nice flow and seemed well-connected. The plot was a bit unclear, but it was nice to read and, to me, the images were very clear, which worked well. 13?