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they didnt ask how relationships contributed to a sense of "not belonging". a sense of belonging, is not alienation. but hey you may be right, would of been better off totaly answering the question i wuld think though, becaus most ppl didnt. perhaps you should look up a definition of belonging.

yoooo. ask yourself. do you celebrate when you are feeling incredibly upset? no. yu wwere ment to celebrate a relationship, u did the oppposite.

yesss, but board does it to seperate the students. i was just gona rewrite da story i memorised, but then saw the celebrating relationships, so decided to moulld a relationships with heroin, prety much a metaphor for him not havign anyone else, and then a relationship with a police officer who...

rabbitoos yu adresed da question well. if u chose first quote even beter. good job mata.

they do deduct marks mata, because they see 2 related as haaving an advantage, wen da question asked for one. prety sure anyway cuz

ahhh hektik that i read the question. duno why yuse did two wen da question specified one related..

depending on how the year goes which doesnt look to good, but hey means better scaling for those who do well. in 2003 a raw mark of a 73% scaled to a band 5 82 mark in adv.English. So yes english scales well if you do well. also wen the marks are scaled down out of 50 it also scales well, as its...

plan and simple. the question said one. when did that mean two? develop your common sense please.

for those that did not belonging it is possible you wiill get good marks if u adapted alienation and then developing a reelationship that lead to belonging, and a better life etc. if u focused only on not belonging then unfortunately yu didnt answerr the qeustion. need to incorporate celebrating...

meilz look at my post above yours. that shuld clear things up. unfortunately u didnt celebrate relationships and u failed to answer the question. i dont no why u wrote about that honestly. you will not go well im sorry, just being direct so you dont get disapointed if ur marks are lower than u...

my response was nourished by my understanding, which was in turn able to potentially nourish 15 marks for the essay :P. jus realy excited i did well :)

sory to say but yuu majorly stufed up, ur story has nothing to with celebrating a relationship, thats y u gota understand the question n shit. i did a story similar to urs except i had a drug addict who was adicted to heroin, and that was his relationship as he escaped from the world through...

yesss understanding also was able to nourish my response.

gee its great that pppl who only know how to write pre-prepared essays wulda got f'ed up bahahhahahaha. hsc big discriminator for english, because sum ppl can go well spending 2 weeks preparing an essay, and to those ppl who can actualy adapt to the question.

if another classmate does well you'l get draged up at their expense

and yes you do drag your classmates down.

obviously u shuldnt of had a school ranking of 1 if u arent even able to read a question. the question asked for ONE related text lmaooooo. but if you did two you shuld be fine, they will just ignore the related text u did the worst in. =)

was great, fited my response perfectly. expecting full marks. fuly sik

my story waz hektik cuz. expecting round 14/15, wrote bout a drug addict who's life was in downward spiral, and got arrested by a police officer, who locked him up for 4 years, he came outa prison and made friends with the officer for saving his life from a world of drugs. great story so much...

i managed to write 26 pages all up, hektik test, so happy with how i went. and nar mata my handwriting not that big. jus normal size ay.