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Okay, whatever, don't listen to the person who is studying creative writing and the person who excelled in EE2.

Still, imagine you're in that situation. You have a partner who just made you FURIOUS. You are finally letting yourself express the frustration that you normally keep inside. Tell him he's wrong. Accuse him, as he accused you.

I know. Who has the self-control in a heated argument (and a person willing to let them finish) to manage such a long sentence? =/

Use an image or something. Did she clench her fists, narrow her eyes, and/or grit her teeth? Show her deciding to fight back. And especially in such a heated situation, keep your dialogue brief and punchy. She's at her limit. Make your dialogue audible.

It's still angsty. Also, it defies the 'show don't tell' principle. Just saying.

Angsty.

Bitch a little more.

What? No. Give me a little credit, man.

Me, my oldest sister, and my mother are all taller than our partners in heels. Actually, they might be taller than their partners without heels. Fuck, I don't knowww

I told him to stop cheating on meilz, slutface.

Taught via example.

Why don't you read the book, instead?

Yeah Omar, I'll come to Sydney and stand over you. Or something less retarded. BUT HUSH.

Stop cheating on meilz.

Hush, Hairy Potter. I'll make a woman of her.

Lame bash.org reference? =/ QDB: Quote #77904

I'll show you how I play around. ;)

You are pretty gay.

None of you are worthy of love.

Doubt it. I play GTA.