2023 HSC chat (5 Viewers)

[graceluvsA's]

Good luck everyone we can do this!

 

[nsw..wollongong]

SO EXCITED TO GET THIS DONE I LOVE U ALL

 

[graceluvsA's]

How did everyone find that? . I know i failed that collective question, I just kept saying collective absolute and inconsistencies and Shakespeare encourages subjectivity .

 

[SASH_06_X]

How did everyone find that? . I know i failed that collective question, I just kept saying collective absolute and inconsistencies and Shakespeare encourages subjectivity .

I only had one collective experience in my quotes
Nesa could have atleast made it both individually and collective

 

[aulinia]

I HATED that poem

 

[graceluvsA's]

I HATED that poem

SAME HELP. I said that it’s such a descriptive scene that it showcases the human desire to capture everything in a moment. Honestly idk what was going on .

 

[aulinia]

SAME HELP. I said that it’s such a descriptive scene that it showcases the human desire to capture everything in a moment. Honestly idk what was going on .

I was honestly hoping there’d be an image, I was yapping my head off writing that 5 marker

 

[jc7726]

I HATED that poem

forreal bruh i only got like 3/4 through on that last q bc i did essay first and didn't manage my time

 

[dsakvyilsa]

That 5 marker was so annoying, but apart from that I was actually really happy

 

[jc7726]

it's weird knowing you're sitting the same exact exam as like 20-30k other people at the exact same time

 

[CHarmon]

WHOEVER WROTE THAT EXAM GOD BLESS YOU. MY ESSAY LITERALLY FIT PERFECTLY TO THE QUESTION. RAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH

 

[ZombieMage1]

I hate how halfway through the exam I know i'm waffling so hard and I keep telling myself that but can't do anything, especially the paradoxes question gg for real

anyways time to pray they don't give me a quote/extract for mod A and B, I will jump off the Dr. Agnes Bennett footbridge if they do

 

[jossasmith05]

The hardest part of the HSC isn't the exams, it's finding the motivation to study for paper 2

 

[graceluvsA's]

What did people say for the self narration question? It was so confusing.

 

[RR206]

What did people say for the self narration question? It was so confusing.

Something about undermining the true meaning of "the journey" and presenting a false view of experiences (pretty much waffle)

 

[ZombieMage1]

What did people say for the self narration question? It was so confusing.

Convergence of unique experiences to the generic word "journey", also how it's overused

keep in mind this is coming from a rank 160 english so don't take this too seriously

 

[graceluvsA's]

Something about undermining the true meaning of "the journey" and presenting a false view of experiences (pretty much waffle)

I waffled about how romanticising the mundane is bad but then also contradicted myself by saying the resilience towards monotony is good. Idk I just said theatre extended metaphor .

 

[vvert2023]

What did people say for the self narration question? It was so confusing.

she challenges it through her high modality and personal pronoun that established a strong pathos which ultimately invites the consideration of the challenging of adversity and therefore places an imperative upon the reader...

simile comparison to the play displays the absurd fantasy of self-narration, staccato sentences with a personal appeal, and personal pronoun

 

[SadCeliac]

she challenges it through her high modality and personal pronoun that established a strong pathos which ultimately invites the consideration of the challenging of adversity and therefore places an imperative upon the reader...

simile comparison to the play displays the absurd fantasy of self-narration, staccato sentences with a personal appeal, and personal pronoun

irony of him saying 'gonna go on a journey' suggests that anything can be over dramatised and hence challenges self-narration

 

[vvert2023]

Thoughts on this thesis:

Texts rely on the portrayal of relatable ideas pertaining to collective human experiences to enrich and expand the reader's perception of the world through this portrayal enabling the construction of ideas that explores paradoxes, anomalies and inconsistencies thus providing an understandable base to challenge assumptions and prompt reconsideration.

Then the text related one:
To a great extent, Orwell in his dystopian novel... is able to ignite ideas relating to collective human experiences regarding the fulfilment of needs in his display of how oppressive systems that curtail the fulfilment natural and basic human needs create a brutal and unliveable society. He enriches the audience's knowledge of the world thereafter in establishing a meta-fictive address of his context that creates an imperative upon the audience to protect the inherent human needs of any individual in embracing the desire to connect as an agent that enables this fulfilment of all of Abraham Maslow's hierarchy of needs (i explain these in the paragraph that follows the intro). The character of Winston, although relatable to the audience as being the most distinctly human character, is presented as a persecuted anomaly within the oppressive Oceania that therefore addresses Orwell's context meta-fictively to establish this aforementioned imperative that prompts the expansion of the audience's knowledge of the world to protect the inherent human needs of any individual as they live in "a time when thought is free…when truth exists.”

I ended up getting down 11 quotes in 5.75 pages and was able to make good links to my thesis and the question constantly, maybe forgot a couple times. Only issue is my 2nd para was half a page long but had a good link and 3 quotes. Thoughts everyone?