2023 HSC chat (12 Viewers)

[nsw..wollongong]

Film it an post on YouTube pls

OMG WE SHOULD ALL DO IT!!

 

[Unovan]

Bruh I'miterally so drunk Rn but guys all of us are gonna smash hsc and you know what I'm proud of each and every one of you. All of you are dedicated to your atar and that I'd grest to see. Every on e on here will achieve their goals even if they get drunk one night. I love you all bored od studies!!!!!

 

[SadCeliac]

Bruh I'miterally so drunk Rn but guys all of us are gonna smash hsc and you know what I'm proud of each and every one of you. All of you are dedicated to your atar and that I'd grest to see. Every on e on here will achieve their goals even if they get drunk one night. I love you all bored od studies!!!!!

bro's gonna wake up and have no clue when he wrote that

 

[SadCeliac]

I'm moody so I'm gonna be harsh with my feedback
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do better gluten.

pls don't do that, that is cringe
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also since it's an evaluate question i'd say use evaluative language for the funsies like Eliot effectively [blah], etc.

GUYS can I get some feedback on this intro pleaseee:

‘In comparing T. S. Eliot's early poetry to his later work, differences appear in terms of his style and approach to the subject matter.’

Evaluate this statement in light of your study of Eliot’s poetry.

In your response, make close reference to TWO poems from the prescribed text.

Examining the thematic transformation of Eliot’s poetry allows for valuable insights on the decaying Modernist world and its shift in spirituality, revealing that as man declines spiritual connection, he becomes trapped in a purgatorial lack of purpose. Thus, Eliot’s poetry certainly contains differences in poetic style and approach to the subject matter when comparing his works over time, as seen in Eliot’s contrasting poems, “The Hollow Men” and “Journey of the Magi”, which communicate starkly different messages on spirituality and human progression. “The Hollow Men”, which reflects Eliot’s post-WW1 depression and lack of hope in the potential for the industrial revolution to do good for modern man, depicts a world void of spirituality and connection, suggesting that man is trapped within a hopeless reality. On the other hand, “Journey of the Magi” demonstrates how by finding spirituality, the individual is able to transcend the physical constraints of the modern world to find a better purpose. Evidently, by framing different opinions throughout his changing poetic repertoire, Eliot’s poetic style allows him to develop his fundamental beliefs over time, posing deep existential questions to his audience.

 

[kittykat55xoxo]

Hey can someone mark some of my english standard responses please? In need of desperate help and have a lot of improving to do!! please reply to this if you're available.

 

[vvert2023]

law but wtv i was so confident

bro laws hard to get into tbf. my mate nearly didnt get it and he was getting all A's and 1 C.

 

[raspberriesandpears]

are people still predicting atars? do mine please and thank you

 

[SadCeliac]

97-99 ?!

aeonium I stg when we all finish and you're still here next year it's gonna be a ghost town rip

 

[raspberriesandpears]

97-99 ?!

god i hope so
i'm difficult i know because i don't post much

 

[yolo tengo]

probs at least 90 bcz bos has an very skewed demographic

ur being rude rn apologise

 

[yolo tengo]

aeonium I stg when we all finish and you're still here next year it's gonna be a ghost town rip

bruh

 

[SadCeliac]

bruh

aeonium and yolo the ballet dancer **

 

[nsw..wollongong]

GUYS can I get some feedback on this intro pleaseee:

‘In comparing T. S. Eliot's early poetry to his later work, differences appear in terms of his style and approach to the subject matter.’

Evaluate this statement in light of your study of Eliot’s poetry.

In your response, make close reference to TWO poems from the prescribed text.

Examining the thematic transformation of Eliot’s poetry allows for valuable insights on the decaying Modernist world and its shift in spirituality, revealing that as man declines spiritual connection, he becomes trapped in a purgatorial lack of purpose. Thus, Eliot’s poetry certainly contains differences in poetic style and approach to the subject matter when comparing his works over time, as seen in Eliot’s contrasting poems, “The Hollow Men” and “Journey of the Magi”, which communicate starkly different messages on spirituality and human progression. “The Hollow Men”, which reflects Eliot’s post-WW1 depression and lack of hope in the potential for the industrial revolution to do good for modern man, depicts a world void of spirituality and connection, suggesting that man is trapped within a hopeless reality. On the other hand, “Journey of the Magi” demonstrates how by finding spirituality, the individual is able to transcend the physical constraints of the modern world to find a better purpose. Evidently, by framing different opinions throughout his changing poetic repertoire, Eliot’s poetic style allows him to develop his fundamental beliefs over time, posing deep existential questions to his audience.

better thesis wtf happened with that other man that wasn't even u
"revealing that as man declines spiritual connection, he becomes trapped in a purgatorial lack of purpose" shorten this, it seems like a mere summary of his poems. u haven't talked abt his early works vs his late works (personal voice -- reflection of eliot's spiritual journey is followed through his textual identity or sum)

"Thus, Eliot’s poetry certainly contains differences in poetic style and approach to the subject matter when comparing his works over time, as seen in Eliot’s contrasting poems, “The Hollow Men” and “Journey of the Magi”, " umm uve simply repeated the question here. what is the subject matter? define it.

" industrial revolution" its the 2nd revolution, be specific.

"o do good for modern man" like what...?? what did Modernism promise society that made it so enticing and disillusioned individuals?

 

[nsw..wollongong]

did anyone get bond uni scholarship interview?

 

[SadCeliac]

better thesis wtf happened with that other man that wasn't even u
"revealing that as man declines spiritual connection, he becomes trapped in a purgatorial lack of purpose" shorten this, it seems like a mere summary of his poems. u haven't talked abt his early works vs his late works (personal voice -- reflection of eliot's spiritual journey is followed through his textual identity or sum)

"Thus, Eliot’s poetry certainly contains differences in poetic style and approach to the subject matter when comparing his works over time, as seen in Eliot’s contrasting poems, “The Hollow Men” and “Journey of the Magi”, " umm uve simply repeated the question here. what is the subject matter? define it.

" industrial revolution" its the 2nd revolution, be specific.

"o do good for modern man" like what...?? what did Modernism promise society that made it so enticing and disillusioned individuals?

thank youuu xx

 

[nsw..wollongong]

i need advice idk where or not to go to my school formal's after party

 

[SadCeliac]

i need advice idk where or not to go to my school formal's after party

go - it'll be fun and you can have a break

 

[nsw..wollongong]

go - it'll be fun and you can have a break

but everyone's drinking and idk, not my scene but idk if ill regret not going yk

 

[synthesisFR]

guys they updated the students online website

 

[nsw..wollongong]

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guys they updated the students online website

did u send this ss to just show what subjects u do