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Would you read the complete story, but as a manga?

  • yes

    Votes: 25 37.3%
  • no

    Votes: 28 41.8%
  • If I'm in it

    Votes: 5 7.5%
  • Depends on the art style

    Votes: 16 23.9%
  • If you keep the story itself interesting

    Votes: 24 35.8%

  • Total voters
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Is the dialogue still not over ffs
Now is actually the perfect time for you to start using **’s for the ‘behind the scene’ moments as we all play along and hang out during the next 2 days.
I have a plan on what the hero’s will do, but not for the villains, that’s your job.
Reveal you plan to the readers instead of the characters, and show off your might as the hero’s play around ignorant of the situation outside of their bubble. (It will only be for two days during the story, but make sure the time runs parallel with the hero’s actions for better contrast)
 

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Yea but I’m not sending the Hiva king, just a Hiva soldier.
I don’t know about that. Think about it, from Adam’s perspective, he was born just yesterday and you keep coming out of nowhere once a day, there should be some break from Hiva.
If there’s going to be a soldier, make sure it’s only through sabotage, not confrontation with Adam or Eve.
You could sabotage by stalling Gia or Sabrina from getting near Adam and Eve, but don’t go overboard like kidnapping to lure them out. At least not yet.
 
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Oooo I have an idea
How about I be a Hiva solider who disguises himself as a good guy and infiltrates your ranks
Make sure to really drag it out, but also give plenty of hints from both our facility and King Hiva's perspective (Even if the other characters can't see it) That way, they can have a 'seemingly' longer break from Hiva. Just remember Hiva, Hiva King is meant to be stupid smart, so find a way to actually trick the other characters and readers without raising suspicion. And so so in a way that makes you believe that it wouldn't have been possibly done before in a past life, since we would most likely expect it like when the two other servants appeared. The best way to go about it is by making King Hiva direct the controls and puppeteering without anyone noticing. Like remote controlling a robot or something, ('or something', because that's one example, and I'm sure that there are better alternatives).
PS, I don't mean to suck the enjoyment out of your character, I'm just trying to establish the possible ways that fits the context while working in tandem with enjoying the storytelling process.
 

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No no consider this
There is a Hiva empire
You are this empires enemy
Naturally the empire will send forces to hunt you down
Over time as you overcome these threats more of the stronger Hiva people will come after you. Until the final battle is with the Hiva king
I think the problem is your thinking the Hiva king himself is currently targeting you which isn’t the case. Your currently just on the wanted list as criminals of the empire
Hiva, you should have read what was written. I'll sum up what your character's goal and reasons for his actions till now is:
Adam has a certain attribute in his soul that you wish to acquire, so you don't hunt him down due to his treachery, but because you need him for his 'ingredient. However, the only way to acquire this 'ingredient' is if the original Adam comes back, and the only to do that is through adaptive stressors or familiar events to occur in front of him. That is the reason why you haven't killed him, and why Eve was somewhat accepting of your stressors, due to the fact that the original Adam could come back.
If Adam gets too strong, however, he could become a threat. But still, the Hiva in this story is calculative and knows that there is a sweet spot that he can use Adam as a sacrifice for his personal goals than to save his friends and family like last time, and acquire this 'ingredient'.

This explains why Hiva threw Adam out the window at the start, to speed things up, and why Jimmy didn't do anything but wake up Adam and leave soon after.
Hiva knows that he is strong enough to kill everyone again, since he still has the power from his past life for being a crossbreed between a human and an angel (I can't think of any other reason why you are your original self, but Adam isn't), but decided to let them live to help with speeding up the process of bringing back the original Adam without actually being there.

Also, remember when Jimmy opened the portal and got frustrated? That was because you yourself cannot enter the safe space. However, there are ways around that, like a spy who has been a part of the facility for more than one lifetime, being reintroduced and retrieving their memories, or placing a tracking device on one of us before we entered the portal, or even going through the 4th dimention to view the situation in dierectly, while trying to hide from Gia.

See how many alternatives there are? And they all fit into context!
Please, do something similar to what I just did or build off of one of the alternatives I presented, I think they are all good, and they don't have any interactions that are unnecessary.
 

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Let's just have some time to catch up on the situation and how we are going to approach this. I've stated my idea and why I think Hiva is wrong, anyone else?
(lol, jk Hiva)
 

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Ok, so last time Adam and Eve were flirting and the whole gang was being reintroduced to their interests with some not even knowing.
 

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*Adam, being squished by Eve freezes and looks up to the sky with a stupid expression. He then thinks that this is cliched, but doesn't have anything to reference to, due to his amnisea. So he starts fighting himself in an internal war of knowing that there is a cliche happening, without knowing why it is a cliche. Gia and Sabrina start analysing that there are two things happening at once, and stare at Adam with disappointment for not taking in the moment with purity*
 

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Petunia 'Easy Wave Violet'
Serissa foetida 'Variegata' - Snow Rose

[Left = Eve's favorite flower] [Right = Adam's favorite flower, though he doesn't know yet]
 

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*everyone laughs at the awkward situation that Adam is in, but Eve keeps smiling in his face devilishly. Ironic for an 'angel'*
 

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*A roar is heard in the distance, and everyone freezes, other than Eve and Jimmy, who actually get excited. While Adam looks in the direction of the noise*, "What was that?"
 

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*Eve responds*, "Someone who has been missing you very much, I'll show you!"
*Sabrina gets weary, but Gia begins to skips ahead anticipating the best. Jimmy pushes Sabrina towards the load noise against her will as she cries and tries to bargan*
 

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*Adam and Eve walk together to the other side of the large garden, fit for a castle. And then they come across a building*, "Is it inside there?" *says Adam*
 

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*Eve responds*, "He used to, but I don't think that's possible anymore".
*A large scaly object slithers up and over the back of the building like a wave, and falls back down*
"AHHH! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!~_~" *Sabrina screams*
 

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*Eve responds*, "He used to, but I don't think that's possible anymore".
*A large scaly object slithers up and over the back of the building like a wave, and falls back down*
"AHHH! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!~_~" *Sabrina screams*
"Is it a dragon??" *starry-eyed*
 

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*The creature notices this noise, and the scaly object sticks up. For a moment, there is silence, and Adam begins to freak out*
 

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