English Advanced Sucks (4 Viewers)

[iwanttodogoodinschool]

So how did all of you do in English in junior years and Year 11?

I usually did decent all throughout the junior levels, notably in Year 10 when I came first. And then year 11 was a shit show (mostly cuz of my teacher and the fact that I didn't really try) but in Year 12 lol I actually put a lot of effort and still did shit ahahhahaha

 

[Life'sHard]

So how did all of you do in English in junior years and Year 11?

Exponential decay starting at a peak in year 7.

 

[zizi2003_]

So how did all of you do in English in junior years and Year 11?

i did decent, was legit in top 5 until my trial online exam which only assessed the short answer component of P1 and it was all downhill from there lol- destroyed my rank

 

[specificagent1]

Exponential decay starting at a peak in year 7.

Ae^-kt

 

[specificagent1]

so working off the feedback from my teacher these are the following things i need to work on:

• "Expression"
• "Elaborate"
• "Write more"
• "????"
• "Good"
• "Interesting"

This is all the feedback I have collated in year 12 and hope that it would be beneficial to everyone else in improving your essays

 

[iwanttodogoodinschool]

so working off the feedback from my teacher these are the following things i need to work on:

• "Expression"
• "Elaborate"
• "Write more"
• "????"
• "Good"
• "Interesting"

This is all the feedback I have collated in year 12 and hope that it would be beneficial to everyone else in improving your essays

AHAHAH the "?????" SAME
wow such good feedback, I'm expecting a 20/20 now

 

[iwanttodogoodinschool]

so working off the feedback from my teacher these are the following things i need to work on:

• "Expression"
• "Elaborate"
• "Write more"
• "????"
• "Good"
• "Interesting"

This is all the feedback I have collated in year 12 and hope that it would be beneficial to everyone else in improving your essays

the main feedback I get is to "write neater", how helpful

 

[uniqueusername1]

So how did all of you do in English in junior years and Year 11?

fkin shit. I had the same teacher lol. Before that I was cranking 90s tho.

 

[uniqueusername1]

Na my teacher just says "this is convoluted." Accompanied with this EXTENSIVE feedback is a nice 14/20.

 

[GoldenMelon]

so working off the feedback from my teacher these are the following things i need to work on:

• "Expression"
• "Elaborate"
• "Write more"
• "????"
• "Good"
• "Interesting"

This is all the feedback I have collated in year 12 and hope that it would be beneficial to everyone else in improving your essays

Careful now. You might be looking at a state rank there.

 

[uniqueusername1]

so working off the feedback from my teacher these are the following things i need to work on:

• "Expression"
• "Elaborate"
• "Write more"
• "????"
• "Good"
• "Interesting"

This is all the feedback I have collated in year 12 and hope that it would be beneficial to everyone else in improving your essays

bro your lucky yours gets annotated lol. I only get the sentence in the feedback box.

 

[zizi2003_]

mine just says "???" in everything
LIKE IDK WHATS GOING ON EITHER MS, SO HELP EXPLAIN PLS

 

[uniqueusername1]

mine just says "???" in everything
LIKE IDK WHATS GOING ON EITHER MS, SO HELP EXPLAIN PLS

yes thats basically saying its convoluted. How tho? Why? No answer nor explanation.

 

[zizi2003_]

yes thats basically saying its so convoluted. How tho? Why? No answer nor explanation.

EXACTLY

 

[uniqueusername1]

Also my teacher loves to examine the links of the essay instead of the analysis, thesis and topic sentences. All she says is fix your links.

 

[specificagent1]

The feedback is not constructive.
"expand more" on what? how?
"expression" in what way? what was unclear?

 

[uniqueusername1]

The feedback is not constructive.
"expand more" on what? how?
"expression" in what way? what was unclear?

na its just cause your not white and don't have blonde hair. Thats more clear.

 

[specificagent1]

na its just cause your not white and don't have blonde hair. Thats more clear.

shit how did you know...

 

[uniqueusername1]

shit how did you know...

I could tell by the feedback sir.

 

[zizi2003_]

shit how did you know...

im guessing we're all brown/asian kids here, victims to discrimination by eng teachers who fail to see our talent LMAOOOO