General Thoughts: English Paper 1 (AOS) (1 Viewer)

[photastic]

HAHAHHAAH

One of the old men came to my table and I was asking him something whilst he blew his nose and fking snot fell on my table. He didn't even fkn clean it so I had to put a tissue on it lol. Worst thing ever.

Its a sign saying "Dont fken ask questions"

 

[queviltai]

 

[enigma_1]

Its a sign saying "Dont fken ask questions"

But lyk ewww

 

[Cleavage]

obvs photoshopped

nice try/10

 

[Beterban]

is it okay if i didnt have the word belonging in my essay - it was asking about connections - i had 'connections'

 

[pastelchild]

loved the essay question, comprehension was okay... and my planned creative was no where near communities so i had to adapt in a reallyyyyy weird way... ughhhhhh... paper 2 tomorrow!!!!!!!

 

[Sherlock]

For the creative, I mentioned the first quote, and then straight-away skipped the to next scene, is that fine?

 

[queviltai]

obvs photoshopped

nice try/10

Not so: https://twitter.com/mollous/status/520128823145136128

 

[faisalabdul16]

comprehension was weird, everything else was decent/good

 

[rumbleroar]

I'm so happy my predictions for identity were right! It fit with my generic, I just had to twist the perceptions thing to fit right in. As for creative, i smushed the second one together with the first sentence of my thing. My story isn't necessarily about "larger-world, society" type communities, but hopefully they interpret it as familial communities

Not sure what I talked about in section 1 though, I used the first text and tried to bs my way through whilst desperately searching for techniques. Lol. Gg.


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[Smile12345]

Was a pretty easy exam, although i realised halfway through the first comprehension question that it was asking about the book cover and not the actual article. So i wrote like over a page for 3 marks hahaha

I did the same thing!!

 

[rumbleroar]

For the creative, I mentioned the first quote, and then straight-away skipped the to next scene, is that fine?

Did you develop a relationship between the quote and your story?


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[Beterban]

is it okay if i didnt have the word belonging in my essay - it was asking about connections - i had 'connections' - guys please answer

 

[mreditor16]

I'm so happy my predictions for identity were right! It fit with my generic, I just had to twist the perceptions thing to fit right in. As for creative, i smushed the second one together with the first sentence of my thing. My story isn't necessarily about "larger-world, society" type communities, but hopefully they interpret it as familial communities

Not sure what I talked about in section 1 though, I used the first text and tried to bs my way through whilst desperately searching for techniques. Lol. Gg.


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pretty much felt the same

 

[RivalryofTroll]

Just looked at the 2014 exam.

My thoughts as a 2013er

Section 1:
- Very weird. No 2 marker. Just a bunch of 3 markers then a 6 marker.
- 6 marker - very surprised. It's just basically another 3 marker (since you only need to choose ONE text, rather than TWO texts), except you need to increase your analysis.
- Actual questions themselves are actually easy.

Section 2:
- No central element BS. Just simply a first sentence needs to be used.
- Individuals finding their place in a community? Well, I can see some kids having creatives that might not fit that.
- Overall, pretty good question if you ask me.

Section 3:
- Identity being shaped by connections? That is such a NICE question.
- Basically, any decent generic essay can be easily adapted to this question.

I think 2014 AoS as a whole = relatively easy AoS paper.

 

[Chocolatebubble]

SHORT ANSWERS

S
HORT

A
NSWERS

WHY DO THEY EXIST. THAT WAS CANCER.

I spent way too much time on them and didnt even finish. I had to finish my creative in 25-30 mins (left out ~100 words out of 1100) and then zip into extended, but I couldnt write the last stretch, aka my 2nd related paragraph. so to save my structure i had to write the conclusion

 

[rumbleroar]

is it okay if i didnt have the word belonging in my essay - it was asking about connections - i had 'connections' - guys please answer

Idk I linked my thesis to belonging because AOS is about belonging?


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[Zoeyyy]

It was pretty boring. I screwed up creative bad. My set ones had nothing to do with community because I was avoiding cliches. Ugh

Same problem with me :'(

 

[ushnakhalid]

not but srs did anyone else write about two texts in the 6 marker by accident lmao

 

[RivalryofTroll]

is it okay if i didnt have the word belonging in my essay - it was asking about connections - i had 'connections' - guys please answer

Connections, association, inclusion, belonging, solidarity etc. - it's all correlated words.

In fact, teachers prefer that students avoid using the word 'belonging' too much.