ok im screwed for my related texts (1 Viewer)

[Zeref]

Let's say they ask for one related text. Is it fine to do:
Intro,Core text, Related text, Core text, Conclusion as opposed to
Intro,Core text Idea 1, Related text Idea 1, Core text Idea 2, Related text Idea 2, Conclusion

 

[photastic]

Let's say they ask for one related text. Is it fine to do:
Intro,Core text, Related text, Core text, Conclusion as opposed to
Intro,Core text Idea 1, Related text Idea 1, Core text Idea 2, Related text Idea 2, Conclusion

Option 2 since you have more ideas?

 

[Zeref]

Option 2 since you have more ideas?

yea but cbf and no time lol so is option 1 fine?

 

[photastic]

yea but cbf and no time lol so is option 1 fine?

It's "fine" but the three paragraphs must damn be awesome for band 6.

 

[Zeref]

It's "fine" but the three paragraphs must damn be awesome for band 6.

nah hoping for a high band 4 to low band 5 lol.

other subjects carry me pls

 

[photastic]

nah hoping for a high band 4 to low band 5 lol.

other subjects carry me pls

Just get 100 in mx2 and nws then

1st time I heard someone wanted this

 

[Zeref]

Just get 100 in mx2 and nws then

dont do 4u soz.

hopefully they ask for two related (I have 1 paragraph each for 2 related texts)

 

[RivalryofTroll]

I did 3 body paragraphs iirc for HSC AoS.

Like.

Intro
B1 - First Skrzynecki poem
B2 - Related text and have a link to first Skrzynecki poem.
B3 - Second Skrzynecki poem and have a link to related text.
Conclusion

But each paragraph was so damn huge~~

Worked out for me so... yeah

 

[Zeref]

Just get 100 in mx2 and nws then

1st time I heard someone wanted this

oh u got snaked
nah but srsly that realistically what i'll probably get haha.

I did 3 body paragraphs iirc for HSC AoS.

Like.

Intro
B1 - First Skrzynecki poem
B2 - Related text and have a link to first Skrzynecki poem.
B3 - Second Skrzynecki poem and have a link to related text.
Conclusion

But each paragraph was so damn huge~~

Worked out for me so... yeah

OK much relief. Do you remember word count for the whole essay give or take?

 

[RivalryofTroll]

Yeah, I only resorted to 3 body paragraphs because of time.

My prepared essay for 1 related text was:

B1 - First Skrzynecki poem
B2 - Related text and a link to first poem
B3 - Second Skrzynecki poem
B4 - Related text and a link to second poem

Both ways are fine in the end.

 

[faisalabdul16]

nah hoping for a high band 4 to low band 5 lol.

other subjects carry me pls

That attitude

 

[RivalryofTroll]

OK much relief. Do you remember word count for the whole essay give or take?

My prepared essay was around 1200~

So the essay I actually wrote for HSC AoS... probably 900-1000ish... maybe 1100 at best~~ (then again, whilst I took out a paragraph... I answered the question more so yeah...)

I remember spending like 50 minutes on it though...

 

[Zeref]

My prepared essay was around 1200~

So the essay I actually wrote for HSC AoS... probably 900-1000ish... maybe 1100 at best~~ (then again, whilst I took out a paragraph... I answered the question more so yeah...)

I remember spending like 50 minutes on it though...

ok then.....i believe

 

[Zeref]

My prepared essay was around 1200~

So the essay I actually wrote for HSC AoS... probably 900-1000ish... maybe 1100 at best~~ (then again, whilst I took out a paragraph... I answered the question more so yeah...)

I remember spending like 50 minutes on it though...

actually this is for mod c. does that change anything?

 

[RivalryofTroll]

actually this is for mod c. does that change anything?

Which text?

For Module C, I did the Justice Game and my format for 1 related text was:

B1 - Prescribed text (case 1)
B2 - Prescribed text (case 2)
B3 - Related text and links to both case 1 and case 2

Word count - you should be aiming for 900-1000 words at least if possible.

 

[Zeref]

Which text?

For Module C, I did the Justice Game and my format for 1 related text was:

B1 - Prescribed text (case 1)
B2 - Prescribed text (case 2)
B3 - Related text and links to both case 1 and case 2

Birthday Letters for Conflicting Perspectives

 

[RivalryofTroll]

Birthday Letters for Conflicting Perspectives

Yeah, Justice Game is also for CP.

Well, 4 body paragraphs - I'd do:
Poem 1
Related 1 and link to Poem 1
Poem 2
Related 1/2 and link to Poem 2

3 body paragraphs would be either:

Poem 1
Poem 2
Related text and links to poem 1 and poem 2

OR

Poem 1
Related and link to poem 1
Poem 2 and link to related text.

 

[Zeref]

Yeah, Justice Game is also for CP.

Well, 4 body paragraphs - I'd do:
Poem 1
Related 1 and link to Poem 1
Poem 2
Related 1/2 and link to Poem 2

3 body paragraphs would be either:

Poem 1
Poem 2
Related text and links to poem 1 and poem 2

OR

Poem 1
Related and link to poem 1
Poem 2 and link to related text.

many thanks

You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to RivalryofTroll again.

 

[Thank_You]

Guys what happens if youre stupid like me and memorised AOS essay with 2 related

 

[obliviousninja]

Let's say they ask for one related text. Is it fine to do:
Intro,Core text, Related text, Core text, Conclusion as opposed to
Intro,Core text Idea 1, Related text Idea 1, Core text Idea 2, Related text Idea 2, Conclusion

Would not recommend. Some where in the rubic, it says something about how its supposed to be an analysis of your related in conjunction with the prescribed. The structure you mention lacks depth for an analysis. And what is your plan for the 3rd body?

For me, my structure was:

One related:
Intro
Body 1: idea 1 (prescribed)
Body 2: idea 1 (related)
Body 3: idea 2 (prescribed)
Body 4: idea 2 (related)
Body 5: idea 3 (prescribed)
Body 6: idea 3 (related)
Conclusion

For two related,
Same except I would add discussion of my second text with my first related in the same paragraph.