Urgent help with othello required, please! (2 Viewers)

[chris_93]

Hi guys, im doing Othello for advanced english and i have an assignment due tomorrow which is a speech on othello and how i should act as a director of othello and create it into a modern day movie. I've made it into a lion king type plot and i really need help in editing it, ive been working on it for days and i am 100% satisfied by it, although i just realied that it is a 16 minute speech even though its emant to be 5-8 mintues, ive tried cutting and cutting diffrent parts from my speech and it still is much too long. I've already previously raised this issue with my english teacher, his response was that if the speech goes to long he wall deduct 9 marks away from me. The assignment is out of 20.

So please, if you can assist me comment this thread and i will post you the assignment privatley so my problem can be solved.

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[bugboy]

Hey dude

I will try to suggest some edits if I can .
Send me your paper.

 

[imsopostmodern]

you really shouldnt leave stuff to the night before if you want help. just sayin'

 

[chris_93]

I have an extension till friday the 3/07/09

so i still have time to cut it =)

even though i have NO IDEA on what to cut! =(

 

[moeycq]

i have the same assignment due tommorow lol

iv recreated into a modern day shooting scene followed by death sentence for othello

im having trouble writing the speech and stuff but i think ill be okay.