sorethroat
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- 2008
ok so i got great marks for this (15/15) in my trials but my teacher said its kinda risky...
the marks will depend on the marker only b/c its kind of a weird, sci-fi-ish kinda story where some might not 'get it'
can someone (preferably post 08 HSC) please take a look at it and give me their opinion? post a reply and ill pm with my story
Oh, and i know there's room for improvement so any constructive criticism is welcomed!
the marks will depend on the marker only b/c its kind of a weird, sci-fi-ish kinda story where some might not 'get it'
can someone (preferably post 08 HSC) please take a look at it and give me their opinion? post a reply and ill pm with my story
Oh, and i know there's room for improvement so any constructive criticism is welcomed!