pigas
Member
I sort of have a problem.
We had to make a short story for our assessment about journey, and I showed my teacher the draft, and he said it was very good, original, and he was happy about it. He said there's nothing that I should change.
Then I gave in the final copy, which a different teacher marked. And I got in the "sound" band (9 / 15) and I was unhappy about it, especially since I had followed all the guidelines and my teacher said it was good.
So I talked to the teacher who marked it and he also talked to my teacher about it. The teacher who marked it said he didn't like how I ended the story.
So, what am I supposed to do when faced with an assessment like this? How can I be sure I'll get good marks, if the teachers personal opinion will matter here as well? Everyone liked my story that I showed it to but him. So if this is going to effect my marks, how can I make sure I get good marks next time??
We had to make a short story for our assessment about journey, and I showed my teacher the draft, and he said it was very good, original, and he was happy about it. He said there's nothing that I should change.
Then I gave in the final copy, which a different teacher marked. And I got in the "sound" band (9 / 15) and I was unhappy about it, especially since I had followed all the guidelines and my teacher said it was good.
So I talked to the teacher who marked it and he also talked to my teacher about it. The teacher who marked it said he didn't like how I ended the story.
So, what am I supposed to do when faced with an assessment like this? How can I be sure I'll get good marks, if the teachers personal opinion will matter here as well? Everyone liked my story that I showed it to but him. So if this is going to effect my marks, how can I make sure I get good marks next time??