hellohelllo
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- 2008
could anyone check my poem and tell me:
-how it could be improved
-does it show belonging on more than on elevel etc
and what they thought should be changed etc.
ill send it to whoever is willing to check it
thx
-how it could be improved
-does it show belonging on more than on elevel etc
and what they thought should be changed etc.
ill send it to whoever is willing to check it
thx