Question about the journey essay we did in exam (1 Viewer)

[I'M-CHEN]

there were two ESL classes in my school, the teacher of my class told us we should focus on writing the insights that charactors gained through their journey in our essay, the teacher of another class said they should focus on writing the techniques in essy. I followed my teacher's order (focus on journey) in the exam. can anyone tell me which one is right? how did you write your essay????

 

[HalcyonSky]

you should've explained the characters insights while providing techniques for how these insights were portrayed to the reader, an equal focus on both