PIP intro (1 Viewer)

[misstytegznulla]

ok so im having some trouble starting my PIP. i was told to base it all serious like but i tend to have my own personal style of writin and im finding it hard to put my point across about it. How can i write a good intro that doesnt highlight my writing style, to the extreme anyway
xoxo missty​

 

[noir.]

you should be doing research now. not writing.

 

[misstytegznulla]

yer i dont a lot of research but i want to get the basic intro down just so i no were im heading n plus my teacher sed that i should start writing the intro atleast

 

[arabzuee]

I wrote my intro and got told it was too serious/factual and would be boring for markers. Then I went back and made it personal and have had much more positive feedback...so I think make it personal!