bright_angell
Member
- Joined
- Jan 15, 2005
- Messages
- 50
plain and simple
I don't think so. Diary entries are more informal, and a whole bunch of other really obvious things.bright_angell said:yeah well sorry - i didnt know i was being judged...just making sure- its better to be safe than sorry- and i know what first person is- perhaps i should have elaborated...
Can someone fall into the trap of sounding like a diary entry rather than telling a story from the sole/protagonists perspective? particularly when my story is phsycholigically based...
Sorry to poke you when you're already on the defensive, but don't you think you would have received more helpful responses earlier if you'd simply posted that ^^ in the OP? It would take a lot of lateral thinking to address that concern based on your original question.bright_angell said:Can someone fall into the trap of sounding like a diary entry rather than telling a story from the sole/protagonists perspective? particularly when my story is phsycholigically based...