Alright! Here's one simple tip
Structure your paragraphs in this manner
Intro:
1. immediately RESPOND to the question - formulate a thesis (practice writing only thesis statements for different question, so you can apply them to any question)
2. Define Belonging in relation to your text or Define any other concept, theory... For Frankenstein - briefly outline the context
3. Introduce texts and briefly outline how they reflect belonging
4. Mention themes or concepts you will be discussing (for e.g. The themes are......"
Body paragraphs:
Orientation (for e.g. In Herrick's free-verse prose novel, ....)
I dea (Same as statement - Belonging is linked to...)
F eature ( techniques - you need to collect a list of techniques - I have a folder just dedicated to different types of techniques: cinematogrpahy, poetic, literary etc..)
E vidence (quote - find one that is the BEST example - not just any - judiciously select your quotes)
E ffect (How does this convey ideas about belonging for example,... what aspect of belonging)
L ink (Link it back to the question and your thesis. e.g. Therefore,.... )
Just follow OIFEEL and you'll be fine! Provides essays with a more coherent and fluid structure
Hope that helps!