Essay Assistance! (2 Viewers)

[-allen23-]

HELP for ESSAY! ASAP

Firstly, I need help with an essay question...

I need to understand it...
And learn how to construct it...

I already understand the how structure of an essay is. for eg.

Intro

[Point
Example
Explanation
Summary]

[Point
Example
Explanation
Summary]

[Point
Example
Explanation
Summary]

Conclusion

Heres the question:

Compare how TWO Prescribed Texts explore the tension between context, values and form

 

[MetroMattums]

Re: HELP for ESSAY! ASAP

Note the key words: compare, tension. This means you should explain the differences and similarities of the two texts in terms of context, values and form.

Suggest you write down possible points to discuss that are relevant to the three textual themes in the question.

This question is the easiest to do well in if you know both your texts and their themes and techniques, so make sure you write everything you can about them.

 

[absorber]

Re: HELP for ESSAY! ASAP

Firstly, I need help with an essay question...

I need to understand it...
And learn how to construct it...

I already understand the how structure of an essay is. for eg.

Intro

[Point
Example
Explanation
Summary]

[Point
Example
Explanation
Summary]

[Point
Example
Explanation
Summary]

Conclusion

Heres the question:

Compare how TWO Prescribed Texts explore the tension between context, values and form

My interpretation is compare/contrast the two texts, while looking at how the composers use and manipulate context, the form of each text (e.g. book, movie?) and the values characters adopt in each text and how each of these interact with each other, and how and WHY the authors deliberately manipulate each of these characteristics

 

[-allen23-]

Re: HELP for ESSAY! ASAP

My interpretation is compare/contrast the two texts, while looking at how the composers use and manipulate context, the form of each text (e.g. book, movie?) and the values characters adopt in each text and how each of these interact with each other, and how and WHY the authors deliberately manipulate each of these characteristics

Wow thanks that makes more sense to me =)

i better jot down some points....

Any more advice anyone??

 

[Brontecat]

This is a what my teacher taught me in year 8 and it always helps me

Think of the essay as a trip to the zoo.
-You plan the day i.e. what you're going to do (introduction)
-You go to the zoo, do the stuff u planned, take some happy snaps (e.g. main points) (body)
-You go home, look at your happy snaps and remember the highlights of your day (conclusion)

 

[-allen23-]

This is a what my teacher taught me in year 8 and it always helps me

Think of the essay as a trip to the zoo.
-You plan the day i.e. what you're going to do (introduction)
-You go to the zoo, do the stuff u planned, take some happy snaps (e.g. main points) (body)
-You go home, look at your happy snaps and remember the highlights of your day (conclusion)

lmaooo that was no help at all =) but thanksss

loll


anybody else?!?!?!?!

 

[kiniki]

i dont know what sort of structure that is but it seems highly ineffective if you dont know what youre doing

we use STEEL

S: Statement (Eg, Composer has utilized symbolism throughout this text to represent his POV or whatever)
T: Technique, pretty much same as above but you explain it in detail and how it was used in the text. which goes to..
E: Example, from the text which uses this technique
E: Effect. THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT. The effect of the technique is how it was was used to reinforce/strengthen/manipulate your essay question (or whatever) and its effect on the audience. (Eg, His use of symbolism showed the audience that Simba had an inherent birthright as King and thus the audience was enraptured from that point on rarara) not as elementary as that mind you, but make it the focus of your paragraph!!
L: Link back to the question. (Eg, Hence the composers use of symbolism effectively captures the audiences attn)

so yeah, if you want some paragraphs that use this structure i can send you them, but everybody i know uses STEEL in evvverrry single thing they write whether it be essay, speech, review whatever.

hope this helps a bit

 

[-allen23-]

i dont know what sort of structure that is but it seems highly ineffective if you dont know what youre doing

we use STEEL

S: Statement (Eg, Composer has utilized symbolism throughout this text to represent his POV or whatever)
T: Technique, pretty much same as above but you explain it in detail and how it was used in the text. which goes to..
E: Example, from the text which uses this technique
E: Effect. THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT. The effect of the technique is how it was was used to reinforce/strengthen/manipulate your essay question (or whatever) and its effect on the audience. (Eg, His use of symbolism showed the audience that Simba had an inherent birthright as King and thus the audience was enraptured from that point on rarara) not as elementary as that mind you, but make it the focus of your paragraph!!
L: Link back to the question. (Eg, Hence the composers use of symbolism effectively captures the audiences attn)

so yeah, if you want some paragraphs that use this structure i can send you them, but everybody i know uses STEEL in evvverrry single thing they write whether it be essay, speech, review whatever.

hope this helps a bit

yes yess send me examples =)

 

[bell531]

For this question in particular, i.e. the "compare" type of essay, you might want to think about structuring along the lines of:

- Intro

- An example of how Text A explores the tension (e.g. by examining Text A's use of metaphors, for example, or imagery)

- A similar example of how Text B explores the tension (e.g. an example where Text B uses metaphors/imagery)

- Second example, where Text A explores the tension in another way (e.g. you might examine here Text A's focus on a certain theme or value)

- Second example for Text B, where it explores the tension in another way (e.g. the same theme/value)

etc etc


That's a good way to make your essay flow, as the similar focus on techniques or themes/values will smoothly link the two different texts together.

 

[mitchy_boy]

i dont know what sort of structure that is but it seems highly ineffective if you dont know what youre doing

we use STEEL

S: Statement (Eg, Composer has utilized symbolism throughout this text to represent his POV or whatever)
T: Technique, pretty much same as above but you explain it in detail and how it was used in the text. which goes to..
E: Example, from the text which uses this technique
E: Effect. THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT. The effect of the technique is how it was was used to reinforce/strengthen/manipulate your essay question (or whatever) and its effect on the audience. (Eg, His use of symbolism showed the audience that Simba had an inherent birthright as King and thus the audience was enraptured from that point on rarara) not as elementary as that mind you, but make it the focus of your paragraph!!
L: Link back to the question. (Eg, Hence the composers use of symbolism effectively captures the audiences attn)

so yeah, if you want some paragraphs that use this structure i can send you them, but everybody i know uses STEEL in evvverrry single thing they write whether it be essay, speech, review whatever.

hope this helps a bit

that is genius
thanks for that

 

[allira92]

i dont know what sort of structure that is but it seems highly ineffective if you dont know what youre doing

we use STEEL

S: Statement (Eg, Composer has utilized symbolism throughout this text to represent his POV or whatever)
T: Technique, pretty much same as above but you explain it in detail and how it was used in the text. which goes to..
E: Example, from the text which uses this technique
E: Effect. THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT. The effect of the technique is how it was was used to reinforce/strengthen/manipulate your essay question (or whatever) and its effect on the audience. (Eg, His use of symbolism showed the audience that Simba had an inherent birthright as King and thus the audience was enraptured from that point on rarara) not as elementary as that mind you, but make it the focus of your paragraph!!
L: Link back to the question. (Eg, Hence the composers use of symbolism effectively captures the audiences attn)

so yeah, if you want some paragraphs that use this structure i can send you them, but everybody i know uses STEEL in evvverrry single thing they write whether it be essay, speech, review whatever.

hope this helps a bit

we use either

P oint
E xample
T echnique
E ffect
L ink

or

S tatement
E xplanation
X - ample
Y ? (Why?)

whatever works

 

[kiniki]

q: how does the road not taken explore the concepts of journeys

Frost has utilized personification to render the road as human and as a prominent device to relate a physical to an inner journey, ‘To where it bent in the undergrowth’, ‘because it was grassy and wanted wear’. Giving one path the human characteristic of ‘wanting wear’ reveals that it is more obscure and less travelled, offering a journey of new discoveries and the exploration of unseen territory that can be profoundly different to the other path which seems like it has been travelled more often. But, when Frost stops and evaluates both paths he decides that they are actually comparable ‘Had worn them really about the same’ which further suggests that at times, it might not be the context of the journey that decides what effect it will have on the traveller but actually the influence of the travellers perceptions, beliefs and response to change that will mould the effect of the journey.

q: are the opening scenes of othello effective in engaging the audiences interest

Animal Imagery is also developed in Scene 1 with Shakesphere conveying the emotional characteristics and concerns of the characters through the inclusion of degrading metaphors. This also reinforces the centrality on conflict which is evident throughout the opening scenes of Othello, an imperative device within drama in reference to reeling in the audience’s attention. ‘Even now, now, very now, an old black ram / is tupping your white ewe.’ This refers to Othello and Desdemona’s interracial relationship, demeaning Othello’s ethnicity and furnishing him with a vulgar persona. This comparative quotation also establishes the ‘good vs evil’ premise of the play. Iago speaks of their relationship as being primitive and superficial, further vilifying the couple and hence draws the attention in from the audience, evoking an emotional response to the racial criticisms.

q: how did stalin manipulate various political factions

Two factions dominated the Russian government, the left and right parties. Essentially Stalin marginalized political points of views and oscillated between the two parties when it suited his personal gains. The left faction, led by Trotsky as well as Kamenev and Zinoviev with lesser roles, sought rapid industrialisation, immediate socialization of agriculture and a continuation of war communism. The right faction, led by Bukharin and Rykov wanted an extension of Lenin’s NEP and a gradual adoption of Communism principles in Russia. During his ascension to power, Stalin eradicated the leaders of the two along the way to absorb their power in a manipulative and almost mercenary-like manner. His legacy of ‘Socialism in one country’ drew appeal from either side. It satisfied the right party as it placated their apprehension of the left faction’s internal affairs, and it also appealed to the left party as socialist principles sought to obliterate any capitalist outlooks that were still potent in the Russian public, notably in the agriculture industry. Stalin’s political position was moderate and manipulated policy to suit his own political agenda.

if you need any help deconstructing them just buzz me but really, learning how to write an essay and structure para's is the most important skill !!