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Crime essay feedback - Effectiveness of the Criminal Investigation Process (1 Viewer)

yanujw

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Could anyone provide feedback for my practice crime essay? I handwrote it in 40 minutes under exam conditions (but have typed it up now to make it easier to read). The question was...

Assess the effectiveness of the criminal investigation process as a means of achieving justice. (straight from the syllabus learn-to column)
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hey I think its good however there are just things you need to improve on such as creating a strong thesis and the use of high modality. But overall Id let someone with more experience take over hope my advice helped in some way.
 

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