A Story (1 Viewer)

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Hey guys.

Can anyone give me any ideas / input on how im going to make my thing work lol.

Its a story with two main characters, in different dimensions.
One character is in first person, the other is in third person.

And the story is mainly about them two. There's like, very little human contact so I dont know if I'll be able to keep my audience

 

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I've done alot of thinking and planning on the story, I just dont feel too safe disclosing it on this website so early into the year

Well, basically I'm comparing the two characters since they are the same people (in different dimensions) and how they react to stimuli. And the first person one is in present tense, and the third person one is in past tense.

Lol, are there any good books in engaging audience? ><