I think my teacher is losing it. She has gone through the notes stage and is now trying to convince us to make it into a game, like concentration so that we can match the quotes/references to the syllabus point.
Okay you could use:
Patch Adams
Music by Archie Roach (too many to list)
Treaty - Yothu Yindi
"big hands" play (about 20pages long)
poetry by Kath Walker
Hope this is of some help.
Not just stelae, but also translations and transcriptions of information from the tomb. Miriam Lichtheim, Alberto Siliotti, and Breasted are great sources for this kind of information.
Are you studying Ramesside Egypt?
Wasn't Servilia Caesar's mistress? Didn't he bring her the pearl back from England? Didn't she help with political posturings behind the scenes?
She was also Brutus' mum. She was also Cato's half sister.
varus, don't panic, both have the capability to be interesting depending upon your attitude, your teacher's attitude and the resources that you use. Egypt isn't that bad!
I agree with Jess04, its a good essay. You might want to rethink the first sentence, as it tends to send the markers nutso. Also try to include some sources/references.