Cheers :)
Yeah I tried but it's the only way I could fit it in. I don't think it will matter as much because it's not like it suddenly ends with "...and then I woke up."
This is my creative writing piece so far. Exam's tomorrow and I just started writing a while ago. Looking for some feedback on it so far etc.
My father’s been dead for five years, so you can imagine my surprise when I saw him the other night in my dream. Well, I didn't really see him to be...
- Camera angle pans into a long shot, contrasting the dark Gothic architecture of Edward's castle to the fluorescent suburbia.
- Close up of the posters in Edward's room of other "freaks". Shows his want to belong.