Renata
Biology, Business Studies, Economics, Modern History, Studies of Religion (1 Unit) and Standard English
My ATAR aim is in the high 80s, low 90s. But anything from 80+ I'll be proud of :)
Sounds like a mixture of characters stories from Shawshank Redemption... Suicide is a very common story ending through out the HSC I've heard.
It's a good plot, a different ending might be better though.