Mod C full marks discursive piece 20/20

I was inspired by Zadie Smith and I wrote this in an undertime exam and my teacher loved it so much she got me to type it out so my class could read it. My stimulus was "Do I dare disturb the universe?" from T.S. Eliot's poem 'The love song of J. Alfred Prufrock' (my teacher has a thing for always doing stimulus' for the texts for the module we will study next). Hope you enjoy . (BTW the titles are just subheadings that I copied (emulated)* from Zadie Smith because I thought we would maybe do a reflection .