Hey, the essay seems pretty good as you actually answered the question pretty well.
Also, regarding the us of "I" or "my", we were told by our teachers that you only use this once in your essay and that's in your thesis and conclusion. But how you would use it is like this: "From my study of...
I'm an ectomorph which means i've got a high metabolism. Therefore i have no body fat.
But if you want abs, you're gonna have to lose the fat around your waist. Best way to do it is jogging. With the footy players they've got some fat but have got more muscle.
If you wanna see something that...
I don't do chin-ups cos i'm a bit too tall (196cm)
But, with push ups i can do 45-50 (been doing them everyday) 2 seconds up 2 seconds down.
With sit-ups it depends on the type. If you're talking bout the type in which you keep your back straight, knees bent and only lift you torso 20...
I don't do chin-ups cos i'm a bit too tall (196cm)
But, with push ups i can do 45-50 (been doing them everyday) 2 seconds up 2 seconds down.
With sit-ups it depends on the type. If you're talking bout the type in which you keep your back straight, knees bent and only lift you torso 20...
Like Gunner4yfe said, shorten the story if you can.
Also, avoid the use of the word belonging. It makes the story appear a bit cliche. Instead you could use at the end: "wherever you are; i knew i found my place". This is because the markers understand that this is a belonging piece before...
I don't understand. Let them build one. It's not like they would use it to attack America cos they know that they would get there arses kicked.
Btw they should be entitled to one seeing the large number that the US has. The US cannot be the only country entitles to nukes.
Oh yeah...the best one from the 2007 year 12 was "King Dux" and he got 100 UAI...so he planned his well.
And ive got a friend who has massive quads and is putting QUADZILLA
another guy with a last name of yamamoto is puttin YamamotoRazr
and i guy called bardia mite be putting bombardia...
Haha bro...I like your idea
But i'm putting Nikobalakhof...it means something in another language and if you find what it means you will piss yourself. :D
The best textbooks are the Surfing series. One book per topic. They have the best questions and explanations. They're $20 each and there are four so it may be a bit pricy.
But for school i use Jacaranda (i hate it, has so many errors) and Excel (slightly better).
Hey guys,
I need some images for a physics assignment and for some reason i cannot find any. I need:
A stroboscopic photograph of projectile motion
A diagram showing the effect of the Earth's rotation on a rocker
A spacecraft re-entering the Earth's atmosphere (showing optimum angles)Yeh...
I have to say i've become really lucky for HSC 2009. I actually for the first time have really good teachers. However they are the complete opposite :P.
My advanced teacher doesn't know a great deal but the notes she gets are amazing...they're all you need. but she acts as if she made them...