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no thats fine because you have to illustrate what tension ur talking about first right? theres no other effective way i feel as long as there is a clear arc you will be fine cus i did the same
Sorry i didnt read it fully, did you talk about the prescribed poem and one other consistently throughout your paragraphs ?
 

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ok i've been thinking back about english paper 2 yesterday, and for mod b i only really talk about the eliot magi extract in the last para but in the other 2 paras i explore the 'poetic tensions' and then unpack how magi partially resolves these issues in my third para.
is that ok, or will i get marked down for not engaging closely with the extract. the most i did in the other two paras was i talked about the issue, e.g. fragmentation and then i wrote that eliot later resolves these in magi
I did similar, but I said how he builds up toward his closing stanza. If u had anything along these lines or brief mentions to the closing stanza in ur other paragraphs u should be fine
 

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Sorry i didnt read it fully, did you talk about the prescribed poem and one other consistently throughout your paragraphs ?
i did preludes + hollow in the first two paras to establish the tensions, and then i did magi extract in the last to show how he resolves it. is that what you did?
 

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no thats fine because you have to illustrate what tension ur talking about first right? theres no other effective way i feel as long as there is a clear arc you will be fine cus i did the same
If it’s an extract u have to constantly talk ab it in every paragraph and link it towards it, one para is not sufficient enough.. like u can still do well maybe just not above 17
 

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i wish i made it onto the tier list
genuinely how bad could their discord have been. one guy got arrested and the rest either got suspended or expelled like what could you have said to get yourself that punishment
 

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If it’s an extract u have to constantly talk ab it in every paragraph and link it towards it, one para is not sufficient enough.. like u can still do well maybe just not above 17
stop thats not correct the extract they provided theres no enough evidence to even out throughout your paragraphs theres no way. if you had a clear conceptual framework that was sophisticated and u refered to the evidence there shouldnt be an issue cause not only did you resolve the tension you demonstrated what the tension is
 

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i did preludes + hollow in the first two paras to establish the tensions, and then i did magi extract in the last to show how he resolves it. is that what you did?
No i built a conceptual framework on the illusion of permanence and i did earth hour (my prescribed poem) and aquarius II throughout all of my paragraphs and the last paragraph (my resolution) included all of the extract except for one quote which was included in my dislocation para.
 

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genuinely how bad could their discord have been. one guy got arrested and the rest either got suspended or expelled like what could you have said to get yourself that punishment
someone should make a documentary on the knox discord server

what do rich kids talk about in their spare time
 

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genuinely how bad could their discord have been. one guy got arrested and the rest either got suspended or expelled like what could you have said to get yourself that punishment
Wait wtf even happened lol
 

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