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congrats on your absolutely wonderful performance in eng adv state rank 1 20/20 in everything welcome to wsumy university after the eng hsc![]()
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congrats on your absolutely wonderful performance in eng adv state rank 1 20/20 in everything welcome to wsumy university after the eng hsc![]()
Sorry i didnt read it fully, did you talk about the prescribed poem and one other consistently throughout your paragraphs ?no thats fine because you have to illustrate what tension ur talking about first right? theres no other effective way i feel as long as there is a clear arc you will be fine cus i did the same
I did similar, but I said how he builds up toward his closing stanza. If u had anything along these lines or brief mentions to the closing stanza in ur other paragraphs u should be fineok i've been thinking back about english paper 2 yesterday, and for mod b i only really talk about the eliot magi extract in the last para but in the other 2 paras i explore the 'poetic tensions' and then unpack how magi partially resolves these issues in my third para.
is that ok, or will i get marked down for not engaging closely with the extract. the most i did in the other two paras was i talked about the issue, e.g. fragmentation and then i wrote that eliot later resolves these in magi
who remember 2022 knox discordi couldnt agree more.
sorry to any private school ppl up in here im mainly talking abt KINGS CRANBROOK KNOX RAVENSWOOD AND PLC
thank u sm im so excitedcongrats on your absolutely wonderful performance in eng adv state rank 1 20/20 in everything welcome to wsu
first course: designing the perfect illchay outfit to beat up the itchbays in bankstown shopping centrethank u sm im so excited
i wish i made it onto the tier listwho remember 2022 knox discord
i did preludes + hollow in the first two paras to establish the tensions, and then i did magi extract in the last to show how he resolves it. is that what you did?Sorry i didnt read it fully, did you talk about the prescribed poem and one other consistently throughout your paragraphs ?
Iβm cookedyeah that is NOT normal
If itβs an extract u have to constantly talk ab it in every paragraph and link it towards it, one para is not sufficient enough.. like u can still do well maybe just not above 17no thats fine because you have to illustrate what tension ur talking about first right? theres no other effective way i feel as long as there is a clear arc you will be fine cus i did the same
LMAOOOfirst course: designing the perfect illchay outfit to beat up the itchbays in bankstown shopping centre
genuinely how bad could their discord have been. one guy got arrested and the rest either got suspended or expelled like what could you have said to get yourself that punishmenti wish i made it onto the tier list
That sounds good to me tbhi did preludes + hollow in the first two paras to establish the tensions, and then i did magi extract in the last to show how he resolves it. is that what you did?
stop thats not correct the extract they provided theres no enough evidence to even out throughout your paragraphs theres no way. if you had a clear conceptual framework that was sophisticated and u refered to the evidence there shouldnt be an issue cause not only did you resolve the tension you demonstrated what the tension isIf itβs an extract u have to constantly talk ab it in every paragraph and link it towards it, one para is not sufficient enough.. like u can still do well maybe just not above 17
hsc a fucking health problemlmaoo after paper 2, i turned slightly to look at one of the invigilators and istg my neck/spine cracked so fucken loudly
No i built a conceptual framework on the illusion of permanence and i did earth hour (my prescribed poem) and aquarius II throughout all of my paragraphs and the last paragraph (my resolution) included all of the extract except for one quote which was included in my dislocation para.i did preludes + hollow in the first two paras to establish the tensions, and then i did magi extract in the last to show how he resolves it. is that what you did?
someone should make a documentary on the knox discord servergenuinely how bad could their discord have been. one guy got arrested and the rest either got suspended or expelled like what could you have said to get yourself that punishment
Wait wtf even happened lolgenuinely how bad could their discord have been. one guy got arrested and the rest either got suspended or expelled like what could you have said to get yourself that punishment
