Essay on "Belonging Brings Acceptance" (2 Viewers)

[brendroid]

Didn't I try to get you to join those dots about ten minutes ago?

 

[1ltx]

so is it basically wat i said?

 

[brendroid]

Basically.

 

[1ltx]

can you help me a bit more on it...? i basically only have those words to put on my blank paper...

 

[brendroid]

Let's see now...

When is this due?

 

[1ltx]

tomorrow..

 

[brendroid]

Uh huh... and you started this late...

Anyways, just go methodolical. Make sure it flows, but go through your essay like a checklist. 'Mentioned this, mentioned this, did this, did that'.

 

[the eye eht]

Sample answers doesn't really help that much. It won't work if someone just feeds you the answer.

 

[the eye eht]

LOL that's the way.
You can still finish it by 3.

 

[1ltx]

Sample answers doesn't really help that much. It won't work if someone just feeds you the answer.

yeah i know, i just need something to start with, then i could flow it.....

 

[1ltx]

Uh huh... and you started this late...

Anyways, just go methodolical. Make sure it flows, but go through your essay like a checklist. 'Mentioned this, mentioned this, did this, did that'.

I got this from last week and i prepared for my school assessments a whole week...T T.

 

[brendroid]

Sounds kinda like me then.

I worked on an essay about the night before it was due. Went through my notes and everything, and just wrote it from scratch. Handed it in relatively unedited too ^^;

 

[1ltx]

HUH...nd could you get good marks out of that?

 

[brendroid]

I could. I might not. It all depends.

 

[Sleight_of_Hand]

your not supposed to be doing belonging in prelim anyways. its agaisnt teh BOS rules. ie. cant do the same AOS. So your school is fucking stupid for two reasons:

1. doesnt follow BOS standards
2. asks you to write essays without texts (you will never need to do this. EVER.)

 

[1ltx]

so.. what kind of examples i could raise in order to conflict both views?

 

[brendroid]

Yes, you can't do that ^^

You can't teach it. You can refer to it maybe, like 'we'll do something similar next year for belonging', but you can't DO it.

So I'm confused a bit too. Especially about the no texts part.

 

[1ltx]

your not supposed to be doing belonging in prelim anyways. its agaisnt teh BOS rules. ie. cant do the same AOS. So your school is fucking stupid for two reasons:

1. doesnt follow BOS standards
2. asks you to write essays without texts (you will never need to do this. EVER.)

..Clam down, it is only the work my tutor set me...

 

[1ltx]

well, sori i didnt mention it prior...

 

[ohexploitable]

Wait... you're in Yr 11 and you're doing Belonging?